Marathon of Memories

2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 7 Poetry Contest// Sponsored by: Mark Toney 
Contest Judged:  8/15/2025 5:31:00 PM
( 2nd Place ) 

Written: August 10 , 2025 


The morning fog low over the empty streets,
soft as a whispered promise.
My shoes slapped the pavement in steady rhythm--
each step a heartbeat counting the miles.
I had yet to run—and those I’d left behind.

Streetlamps stretched shadows across brick walls.
Long, crooked shapes that seemed to shiver.
A dog barked somewhere—
sharp, sudden—
and I remembered even echoes can run far.

I passed the river, silver in the first light,
leaves drifting like tiny paper boats
carrying laughter from summers I can’t hold anymore.
Each puddle mirrored my worn determination,
the uneven steps of a life I’m still figuring out.

At Mile Seven, my legs shake like a leaf
but my brain knocked around a long way—
to faces I love, faces I’ve lost,
half-light I trailed too heavily,
mornings I never perceived.

My hair was windblown.
Mixed with the scent of rain and earth
and the faint hope that keeps moving me further.
I ran—not for medals, not for applause,
but because every stride stitched the fragments
of life into something that felt whole.

When the horizon caught the light--
it wasn’t a line at all.
It was the journey itself—
miles abaft me, ingrained memories,
and the quiet truth.
I ran just find myself
and somehow--I did!
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Ashley Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 11:54 AM
Dear Rowena, another stellar marathon poem from your golden poetic pen! I especially loved "I remembered even echoes can run far." -wow! Beautifully atmospheric! Your last two lines are tender, revealing, exuberant all at the same time. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan
Velasco Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 1:12 PM
Thank you.
George Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 4:04 AM
"I ran—not for medals, not for applause, but because every stride stitched the fragments of life into something that felt whole." Great lines and a beautiful poem. Yes, we run not for medals, but each step leads us to a near finish.... Leaving half way is cowardice. But running towards our destination as best as one can is victory. Wonderful poem. You are not a mere partaker in a contest, but a real runner of the marathon of your life. Congratulations dear Rowena...
Velasco Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 9:21 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words.I’m grateful for the encouragement and for sharing this marathon journey with kindred spirits like you. Congratulations too(-:
Daniels Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 12:04 AM
A lovely offering Rowena of a challenging journey. So clever how you’ve woven in this contest to your own marathon. Loved many lines here - ‘even echoes can run far’ is deeply perceptive. The letting go images are the best. Well done on your placement, dear Poet-Teacher. X.
Velasco Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 9:18 AM
Aw, thank you so much! This marathon’s been such a fun ride so happy to be sharing the journey with fellow poets like you.
Toney Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 8:32 PM
Rowena, another awesome marathon-themed poem. You even made reference to “Mile Seven.” How cool is that? Congratulations on your second-place finish on Mile 7 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 8 has already started.
Velasco Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 9:15 AM
Thank you so much for the kind words and encouragement! I’m truly honored to place in Mile 7, and it’s been such a joy running this poetry marathon alongside everyone. I’ll lace up and keep running strong into Mile 8!
Baker Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 6:37 PM
A FAV for my list, Rowena. The joy of running, I know it well. Great flow and message for us through this fine poetry, my friend. In your case it was truly running for your life. :-) You touched my heart with memories of my long runs with this one. Thanks! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Velasco Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 3:58 AM
Thanks so much, Bill ?? I’m glad my poem could bring back those memories for you. Long runs really do have a way of touching the soul, Sending warm greetings from across the miles!
Winter Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 6:36 PM
Dear Rowena, your poem is a beautiful reflection on the power of running to process memories, emotions, and life experiences. The way you weave together the physical act of running with introspection and personal growth is really compelling :)
Velasco Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 3:53 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words I’m glad the connection between running and inner growth came through. It’s a journey of both body and soul,
Mac Donald Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 5:41 PM
I'm loving this write, but I have to reboot
Velasco Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 3:56 AM
Thanks! I totally get it—go reboot, and I’ll be here when you’re back. hugs (-:
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 5:15 PM
your journey was indeed a marathon! These words were profound and resonated with me: I ran—not for medals, not for applause, but because every stride stitched the fragments of life into something that felt whole. A great deal of truth and wisdom in that line and many others. Faving, hugs, Sara
Velasco Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 3:51 AM
Thank you so much, Sara. It’s amazing how each step—both in running and in life—can piece us back together. Hugs right back!
Hind Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 2:07 PM
This was a lovely read. Like the shadows, the dogs, running, running... <3
Velasco Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 3:49 AM
Thanks! I’m happy you enjoyed it—the running shadows and dogs were such a vivid image in my mind while writing.
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