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Mapmaker

Midday moon with face of milky white, looks to be mapping out this green, green meander. Friend of the Magnolia near stream's muck. Cartographer and minder of meanders.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 5/9/2024 8:23:00 AM

Dear Carol Louise, it's wonderful to see you back and it's a joy to read your lovely poem. I adore the imagery and your use of "m" alliteration and the especially the phrase "minder of meander". Warmest wishes my poetry friend.. ~Susan

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/9/2024 9:00:00 AM

Thank you so much, Susan. It's good to be back with all my favorite poets, my dear friend. Happy writing. I look forward to reading more of your amazing poems. Carol Louise

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/29/2024 11:10:00 AM

Oh, Carol Louise, this is an imagery delight! The moon as a mapmaker - what a wonderful metaphor. So wonderful to see you posting again! Sending you bright milestones and blessings in the midnight!

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/5/2024 11:12:00 PM

Glad you liked the poem. And, yes, it is good to be back to Poetry Soup again. I had gotten caught up in my theology studies, lots of reading, etc. But I'm back with my favorite poets again! Carol Louise