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Many Many Long Years Ago

Walking down the memory lane frozen feelings are warm again on sands of time, waves ebb and flow many many long years ago. red spring flower did not live long yet we pretended to look strong. two willows wept, in ache of woe many many long years ago. we both moved on, trading our souls lotus still bloomed, beyond controls. fate muffled our voices, we did know many many long years ago. I wish we could find each other venting hearts, again together our dreams...wavering to and fro many many long years ago. Resubmitted to : Sponsor Julia Ward Contest Favourite Poem in Rhyme from July 2019 Date written : 12th July 2019 Sponsor Dear Heart Contest Writing Challenge 1, July 2019 - Repeating Refrain

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/10/2020 4:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win...lovely.

John Watt

Date: 9/8/2020 10:38:00 PM

A sad poem filled with an aching longing to reunite. Beautifully composed - congratulations on your win ~ John

Constance La France

Date: 7/19/2019 10:08:00 AM

Debjani, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge with this great write with so many wonderful lines, well done ~

Debjani Mitra
Date: 8/4/2020 7:24:00 PM

My honor friend

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/16/2019 11:05:00 PM

I can see why this made the winners list. Congrats.

Debjani Mitra
Date: 8/4/2020 7:25:00 PM

So glad you liked it. Thanks a lot

Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/16/2019 8:30:00 PM

Congrats on your placement!;)

Debjani Mitra
Date: 7/16/2019 10:08:00 PM

Thank you so much Brenda

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/12/2019 12:43:00 AM

This is lovely Debjani. MY favorite line ....on sands of time, waves ebb and flow. and two willows wept, in ache of woe, we both moved on, trading our souls. The who poem is superb!

Debjani Mitra
Date: 7/16/2019 10:09:00 PM

Thanks Jeanne, for your uplifting comments