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Many Dewdrops

Upon the beautiful flowers many dewdrops sit~wait the dewdrops are filled with powers reaching from the flower towers what did the water drops create what will become their fate. Upon my morning window sill a beautiful redbird in this winter's day with a chill the dripping dewdrops are a thrill they both sit there so very still birds watched the drops without a word dewdrops and birds I heard. Upon the huge tall old oak tree a dewdrop from a leaf I saw a yellow bumble bee she was flying high~low and free she needs some cool water not beef the dewdrop was relief. Upon the big yard of green grass the neighbors love to see many dewdrops looking like glass this yard will definitely pass ask what is their magical key I work on my one knee. Date Written: 6/17/2022

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Eileen Clark

Date: 6/23/2022 2:12:00 PM

Hello, I don't get up early enough to see them now but always loved to see them on the grass and bushes, love your poem.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/24/2022 12:36:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you love this fun write. Dewdrops do get up very early. I don't see them anymore. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away................

Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2022 3:29:00 AM

Your dewdrops imagery and rhyme give life to this poem, Paula, unless the sun comes to spoil the fun! ~ Regards & Blessings // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2022 7:59:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this fun "Many Dewdrops" write. Oh yes, unless the sun comes to spoil all the fun they are having. Have a blessed day................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/20/2022 7:30:00 PM

Certainly you 'due well' with 'do-drops,' Paula! Nice! :) gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2022 7:57:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/20/2022 2:11:00 PM

Very very nice, Gardner One-Knee Dewdropa,

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/20/2022 2:32:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day/week.................

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/20/2022 12:46:00 AM

Your magical key is also my magical key!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/20/2022 9:19:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you have that magical key. Have a blessed day/week.................

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 6/19/2022 8:51:00 PM

Beautiful nature poem, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/20/2022 9:18:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my nature "Many Dewdrops" write. Have a blessed day/week.................

Joseph May

Date: 6/19/2022 5:51:00 AM

Wonderful write Paula, best wishes

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/19/2022 10:45:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your best wishes. So glad you like my Dewdrops write. Have a blessed day/weekend..............

Bill Baker

Date: 6/18/2022 2:38:00 PM

Great entry for the contest, my friend. I liked the imagery and descriptions. Hugs, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/19/2022 10:44:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. So glad you like this "Many Dewdrops." Have a blessed day/weekend..............

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/18/2022 7:13:00 AM

Paula, I am enthralled by the beautiful images that you have crafted with your dewdrop imagery!! Well Done! xxoo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2022 9:33:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. So glad you like this one. It took extra time to write. Have a blessed day/weekend..............

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 6/18/2022 3:05:00 AM

Oh! this challenge with rhyming scheme and syllable count sets in motion verse that is wonderfully surreal...nicely done...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2022 9:31:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this write. It took more time to write. Have a blessed day/weekend..............

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/18/2022 2:11:00 AM

Splendid write . I admire dewdrops on plants and grass. t make the air fresh. i wish you a best placing for this poem.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2022 9:29:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and your best. Glad you like my Dewdrops write. It is a pretty time of the day. Have a blessed day/weekend..............