Many An October Ive Seen

September ushers in the cool, beautiful month of October,
That in turn heralds winter months, which can be bitterly cold,
Slowly my leaves shed into dark green, orange, brown, and gold, 
And as my boughs empty, I reflect on our heavenly maker.

But I am not sad, look forward to the joy of snow when I’ll be laden,
With incredible encompassing whiteness which continues spreading,
But beneath my boughs now, children fallen leaves kicking and playing,
Romance blossoms as guys carve on my trunk,the name of their maiden.

I live out in the country, a serene place, next to a village church,
Families arrive every Sunday, thankful the summer heat has abated,
And look forward to the wonders of October month that God created
Even a few robins stayed behind and on the churches window sill perch.

And then let’s not forget, that October is Halloween month, what fun,
With scary costumes, trick a treating,  and exceptional loads of candy
Children visit neighbors, relatives, everyone in their suburb, so dandy
From door to door until they can carry no more, go home, they are done!

October has 31 days, and each day is a small miracle, I’m still left standing
Rustic beauty abounds everywhere people love it, I’ve been here forever,
Will be for many Octobers to come, sad to see funerals at church, but never
Want October to end, it’s so leafy, crunchy, full of abandon and enchanting!



 Entering Poetry Contest "October"
 Sponsor: Regina McIntosh
01/10/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Castellenas Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 5:34 PM
A wonderful poem for October. October is my favorite month. Me and the grandchildren enjoyed the days of Halloween. Thank you dear Jennifer for sharing the amazing poetry.
Proxenos Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 6:06 AM
Thank-you John - me too love October, but in South Africa, we do not have have bitterly cold weather - during the day the lowest it probably goes in Winter is two degrees centigrade and the highest can go up to 22 or 23 degrees centigrade, so Autumn is very mild. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Horne Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 1:31 PM
such a lovely tribute to October
Proxenos Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 6:01 AM
Thank - you Jack Yes October is awesome,beautiful shades displayed as the season turns from Summer to Autumn. Thank you for a lovely comment, Hugs and blessngs, Jennifer.
Callus Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 1:55 PM
You ought to be proud of this personification, Jenny. October is such a special month; it offers beautiful imagery and lots of inspiration. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
Proxenos Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 9:50 AM
Each season has its beauty Paul - my fave is October followed by Spring Winter and then Summer. It is still Spring her and we reached 40 degrees centigrade yesterday - I think this summer is going to be a scorcher. Thank-you for the compliment Paul, always proud to get one from you. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 1:21 PM
it is truly a wonderful month and you paid it wonderful praise. Great imagery for October.
Proxenos Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 9:51 AM
Thank-you Andrea, it is my best month and I thought the tree should say its own story. Hugs and blessing, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 5:19 PM
Love this line: Romance blossoms as guys carve on my trunk,the name of their maiden!
Proxenos Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 9:54 AM
Thank-you Kim for a wonderful comment - I haven't forgotten you, just busy catching up with replies to my comments. Hope you are safe and well, Blessings, and hugs, Jennifer.
Wolves Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 10:19 PM
October is a playful month. Halloween is my favorite holiday
Proxenos Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 8:00 AM
Unfortunately we don't have Halloween in South Afirca, maybe here and there a little, but how I would love to be part of Halloween some year. Thank-you for commenting RW, will be visiting you page as soon as all my wonderful comments have been answered. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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October 2, 2020 at 2:24 PM
A lovely rendering of October Jennifer, much to make us ponder and loved your final stanza. This also brings back memories of your dear country as the twice we spent holidays there it was in the month of October and at night I remember it was cold brrrr! Blessings and hugs, Gordon
Proxenos Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 8:07 AM
Well Gordon from 4O degrees centigrade yesterday, it went down to 23 today, we are in Spring at the moment - Dec, Jan February are OUR hot summer months. Thank You for a lovely comment Gordon and hope you are keeping safe. Hugs and kisses, Jennifer. Have been catching up on my comments - by this weekend I will begin visiting my friends poetrey pages. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Jennifer.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 9:52 AM
This is my favorite month and my favorite season Jennifer. This poem exudes the richness and beauty of the season. I hope it is a top winner. Blessings xxoo
Proxenos Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 8:09 AM
How are you Connie, my mind is in Hawaii very often and your sad loss reminds me of how vulnerable we are, and how prepared we must be. All my love Connie and heartfelt wishes. Jennifer.
Roper Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 6:44 PM
You've enlighten the qualities of Autumn and the fading of summer so well, my friend good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Proxenos Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 8:15 AM
Thank-you Eve, I haven't entered any of your contests lately but I will be doing shortly. The days disappear so quickly, where do they go to? Thank you for an awesome comment dear Eve, will be vising you as soon as I have caught up with replies on my comments, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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October 1, 2020 at 12:28 PM
- I feel your love for October and autumn, dear sister - A beautiful poem :) - Enjoy all 31 days of purple and gold October has given us :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 8:18 AM
Hi Sunshine Smile, Anne-Lise my dear dear friend, what a lovely comment, A Sunshine Smile comment which radiates love and warmth. Love ya sis! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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October 1, 2020 at 10:48 AM
Hello Jennifer Proxenos, Fro me October is a busy month. I remember getting married in October. My sister got married in October, My nephew's birthday is in October. My mom and dad married in October. My cousin Mike's birthday is in October. A busy month for me. Enjoy your day my frined.
Proxenos Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 8:42 AM
A busy and expensive month I should imagine, I have not forgotten you my friend, I am almost finished answering everybodies comments, I had to catch up from August, and will soon be visiting you poetry page. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Watt Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 10:16 AM
Happy October, Jennifer! You write of this beautiful month that honors both the creation and its Creator. I loved your ABBA rhyme scheme and the colorful images of the month that you include. Enchanting! Hugs ~ John
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October 21, 2020 at 8:39 AM
Thank you for an enchanting comment my dear friend I enjoyed writing this poem and feel that I did honor both the Creator and his Creations, what a lovely thought you put in my mind. Hope you are safe and well, Hugs John and blessings, Jennifer.
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October 1, 2020 at 10:06 AM
I like Autumn season and October! And I adore it when seeing it sashaying through your amazing Rhyme! Dearest soul sister, how exquisite are your words! You pour a lot of life and love into what you write and paint of your soulful imagination! So much delighted by your poetry, dear Jenny! A work of Art worthy of rereads! The best of luck in the contest.. warmest wishes.. God bless you. Love and hugs.
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October 21, 2020 at 8:34 AM
Thank-you Besma dear dear friend and soul sister, I always love your elegant refined comments, your comments should be recorded as something of real beauty, as are your breathtaking poems. I hope you and your family are keeping safe. Always in my though, blessings, love and hugs, Jennifer.
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October 1, 2020 at 9:00 AM
Such lovely imagery. Best for a win. ~~
Proxenos Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 8:25 AM
Thank-you Victor, I haven't forgotten you my friend, you always gives such wise and awesome comments - I'm almost finished replying my comments from all my friends, and then will read everyone's poems. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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October 1, 2020 at 8:14 AM
So many positives here, Jennifer. The poetry is superb, and the tour around October, beautiful..
Proxenos Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 8:20 AM
Thank-you Harry, what wonderful comments you give my friend, love that you are from Yorkshire, feel we are almost related. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Horne Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 7:57 AM
I agree with Tom - beautifully written. Thanks, as always, for the comments - so pleased you liked the shark limerick.
Proxenos Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 6:35 AM
I like all your poetry Jack, I think it is both witty and clever. I am busy catching up answering my friends comments and once I'm done, I will be visiting you and all my poetry friends. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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October 1, 2020 at 4:52 AM
Beautifully written Jennifer, my favourite season, good luck in the contest Hope you are keeping well. Tom
Proxenos Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 6:32 AM
Hi Tom, I feel that Autumn gives us such inspiration to write poetry. I'm happy you enjoyed my poem. Blessings to you and your family, Jennifer.
May Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 4:23 AM
Your words always flow like water Sis!! this is wonderful! Sorry I haven't been around life has been kind of strange we had a Hugh fire that wiped out two towns.
Proxenos Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 6:29 AM
Hi Bobby, Yes we saw and heard the news on CNN, your fires were unreal, hectically scary. I hope you were OK though and not in harms way Thank-you for a wonderful comment bro. and please keep safe. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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