Joyce Johnson Poet Limerick

Manna From Heaven

The crocs were lined around the rim,
catching a nap after their swim,
until hearing, "Wake up guys,
supper's falling from the skies.
I'll race you for a share of him".



Inspired by Carolyn' contest  4th place

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Gerard Keogh Jr. July 17, 2010 at 4:17 PM I like this and the title is winning. I could see a berserk version of this on Benny Hill or Saturday Night Live. Regards, Gerard

Andrea Dietrich July 14, 2010 at 7:41 PM congratulations on your great win, Joyce!

Dr.Ram Mehta July 14, 2010 at 7:05 AM Congrats on then4th place win.

John Freeman July 13, 2010 at 9:28 PM Congratulations Joyce on your num cuatro. Agpt, Moses

Jimmy Anderson July 13, 2010 at 2:36 PM Congrats on your win in Carolyn's Contest, Joyce! And thanks for leaving comments on my Haiku! Means a lot! JA

Virginia Mitchell July 13, 2010 at 1:24 PM Oh-ohooo...sounds like trouble for someone; ) Congrats on your win!

James Fraser July 13, 2010 at 11:12 AM Haha, I like it Joyce. You have me giggling here. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown July 13, 2010 at 10:42 AM Congratulations Joyce on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "To Die For"Limericks. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor July 13, 2010 at 6:45 AM Congrats, Joyce. Nice write. Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire July 13, 2010 at 4:38 AM Limericks are an excellent genre for you, Joyce. Congratulations on your win! There were many witty entries. Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 12, 2010 at 1:45 AM Oh no!! I sure wouldn't want to be their supper-- this is really a wonderful limerick for the contest! "Manna from heaven" indeed! -- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 11, 2010 at 8:35 PM Nice one Joyce ..good luck in the contest.. thankxxx for your nice comments .. glad u enjoyed the Haiku contest.. a collaboration contest is in the works also.. so keep your creative pen flowing... my friend.. with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta July 11, 2010 at 7:40 PM A unique interpretation of the picture, Carie. Good luck

Tirzah Conway July 11, 2010 at 6:51 PM Fantastic Joyce! Wonderful write!~Tirzah~

Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2010 at 5:31 PM Hey, this is really awesome. I am so stupid I could not tell those were alligators in the picture. haha. I hope this wins big. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick July 11, 2010 at 4:17 PM Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one ....Sara

James Fraser July 11, 2010 at 3:19 PM Oh my Joyce, I think your names on the winners podium with this witty Limerick. I can't wait to see the entries in Carolyn's contest. Thank you for your always kind comments >> James