Manna

MANNA


Fresh from the movies when I was eight
Strolling  the snow-covered road with mum late,
Talking  of Heston and movies biblical
And was there such a thing as a miracle?
Deep kid with more than one  kid-question -
Was deep snow  from heaven?  Divine intercession?
Eating chips * from an open newspaper bag,  
Finished mine in a hurry   -  I didn’t   lag.
Drank my vinegar from the  packet’s corner
As was my custom after the Brothers Warner. 
Waiting for her to finish, hoping as always
For her to offer me an extra chip,  my mouth  I raise.
She sees my eye and shoves her hand
In her bag, pulls out a fat chip  and fans
Its heat for me; she reaches down to my
Begging mouth, misses for fun, then second try.
As it slid in a huge snowflake landed on its top
Like icing on a birthday cake from a shop.
Absolute  delight  filled both our souls  - 
Believe me,   that was  the best of our strolls.
Fresh from her bag,  it was mother-warm
Mid  the snow’s  white feather-storm :
It was surely manna from heaven.
It was soul-bread needing no leaven.




Note:   * Chips   is  British English for   french fries.

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Entered in Deborah  Guzzi's contest  FOREIGN  EXCHANGE

Country I am writing from  =  United  Kingdom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 8:05 PM
wow, I just LOVE this nostaglic writing. ONe of my absolute favs in this contest.Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 1:47 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Sydney
Brown Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 10:23 AM
Congratulations Sydney to you for your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Foreign Exchange". Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 9:58 AM
Wonderful write Sedney!Congratulations on your big win in the contest of Deborah!
Puddifoot Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 4:22 AM
congrats on this vivid joint second place win sydney! and thanks so much for your kind words on my poem...all the best, charlotte
Onclaud Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 2:36 AM
cheers for a well-deserved high win in the contest, sydney... heartwarming! :) nette
Sweetheart Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 7:41 PM
Congrats Syd on your great win in Debbie's contest with this brilliant write my friend.. wonderful words of expression with depth.. enjoy with luv..
Guzzi Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 5:55 PM
Congrad's HUZZAH! I'm a sucker for salted Chips!!! great visceral, romantic write wonderful congrad's! Light & Love
Devonshire Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 7:34 AM
Loving mothers will offer their last "chip" to bring a smile to their child's face. Your poems often take us on strolls down memory lane, Syd. Such a delight to read -- you have me thinking of my precious mom. She always put our happiness first. Love, Carolyn
La France Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 7:10 AM
Wonderful memories of mother, I have those kind of memories also, and I treasure each, your poem is wonderful and thanks for sharing this memory~~
Walsh Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 5:22 AM
This is a magical memory - beautiflly expressed. I love 'mother warm' and 'soul bread' - I could murder a chip now reading this! Liz
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