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Man Will Discover Wings To Fly

A day will come when all will suffer from electronic disease a dangerous syndrome not yet medically named but of all limbs No oxygen to inhale-exhale fresh air in polluted atmosphere Eyes burning will cause all the time and ears will less hear Then man will discover wings to fly up above the sky to live life hills and mountains will be the fit living places to be safe For Constance La France- A Rambling poet Written by: Six lines poetry by bldevnath September 11th,2011

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/15/2011 1:42:00 PM

I found my wings in a most miraculous way bl. Can we fly together? Luv, Elizabeth

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/22/2011 9:34:00 AM

Sorry, I was out of sight of Poetrysoup due to technical reason of the site. No matter, I am ready to fly with you. Let God bless me first, my friend. bl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/13/2011 9:03:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, devnath

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/14/2011 10:20:00 AM

Thanks for giving congratulation and I too give for your win. Thanks my friend, bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/13/2011 4:08:00 PM

CONGRATS BL ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN WITH THIS DYNAMIC DELIGHT IN POETRY MY FRIEND.. SO HAPPY TO SHARE WINNERS LIST WITH U LUV...

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/14/2011 10:07:00 AM

Congratulation to you too for your win in many contests, loved it my friend. bl

Bob Quigley

Date: 9/13/2011 10:42:00 AM

Interesting philosophy. Nice poem. Congratulations on your win.

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/13/2011 12:44:00 PM

Thanks for giving congratulation to me. Hi! my new friend, God bless you. bl

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/13/2011 9:42:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Bl. Excellent write. Nice going. Ralph

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/13/2011 12:47:00 PM

Hi! my new friend, Lovely you are. I shall read of all just I need time, Searching truth from all spheres. Thanks for your comment.bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/13/2011 8:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Six Lines Of Poetry, Please" contest BL. Love,Carol

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/13/2011 12:54:00 PM

I had given you advance congratulation for your win. I feel and try to feel the best. Thanks for your comment. bl

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/11/2011 6:07:00 PM

I'm ready bl, can go any time - you have a fantasic idea, let's try it out!

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/14/2011 10:03:00 AM

Certainly we will fly with wings one day, I am confident, my friend. Chance is less but not nil. bl

Earle Brown

Date: 9/11/2011 1:14:00 PM

Meaningful write. Please read my poem "Made in China"

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/14/2011 10:04:00 AM

Thanks for your comment, read your made in China, nice one, enjoyed. my new friend. bl