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" LIFE " MY PHOTO, ©

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Man: The being where the matter and spirit meet The temporal and the eternal exist The heart and the logic endlessly compete The Good and Evil one another delete Man: A being where order the chaos fight A being that constantly searches the light A being that wishes God's path to follow A being that feels joy and great sorrow Man: A being in a state of much confusion A being of truth and also illusion A being that can love but also could hate A being unable to escape his fate Man: Is the ambassador of God on earth Representing divinity's holy breath He lives to guard Lord's heavenly Will Defending God's law is his only thrill! © Demetrios Trifiatis 01 February 2022

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/2/2022 3:14:00 AM

Fabulous insightful write Demetrios. Hope the new year is treating you well.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/2/2022 6:33:00 AM

So kind of you to comment , dear friend, Scott. Thank you!

Michael Tor

Date: 2/1/2022 5:03:00 PM

Since Adam and Eve we have been flawed but there is hope in Jesus and living in the spirit of love and obedience to his commandments. Love this one Demetrios , may the Lord richly bless you...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/1/2022 5:44:00 PM

Always a pleasure to receive your visits, dearest friend, Michael. It is true that following the path that Jesus indicates we are going to be saved. Thank you!

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/1/2022 11:21:00 AM

This poem has a lot to teach and think about, my friend Demetrios. In your poem, you beautifully conveyed the spirit of humanity; humankind has many flaws and that we should all seek to evolve.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/1/2022 5:42:00 PM

Thank you very much for your lovely comment, dearest friend, Lasaad. Hope all is well. Blessings!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/1/2022 6:03:00 AM

Much to learn and reflect in this poem my friend. Enjoyed the flowers.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/1/2022 6:42:00 AM

I am glad you found my poem a worthy one, dearest Vijay! Thank you so much. Blessings.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/1/2022 5:56:00 AM

You captured the essence of man well in your verse , man has many faults but we should all strive to be his ambassador on earth. Hope you're well Demetrios. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/1/2022 6:41:00 AM

I appreciate your comment, dearest Tom! I am better. God bless you!