Doris Culverhouse Poet Free verse

Male Man of Mine

My moody quiet, withdrawn man,
So few words given to your family.
Does not see the soil around the toilet
But can pick out a gunstock nick at two
hundred yards away.
Cares not for life beyond a gun's eye view.
Yet we compliment each other
You are the peanut to my butter,
Peach in my cream,
Love

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Ts Lewis October 26, 2009 at 10:22 AM Brought a smile to my day

John Freeman October 11, 2009 at 5:53 PM Sound as tho your male man is your cup of tea, Doris. Good to hear in this day and time so many divorces taking place. Congratulations and God's love to you both. Sincerely,Love, Moses

Sara Kendrick October 11, 2009 at 11:15 AM Interesting point of view. Aren't all men like this ? Keep writing. Mom

Carolyn Devonshire October 10, 2009 at 10:34 PM They say opposites attract, Doris. And while this hasn't worked for me, I'm glad you "the peanut to (your) butter!" Love, Carolyn