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Male Man of Mine

My moody quiet, withdrawn man, So few words given to your family. Does not see the soil around the toilet But can pick out a gunstock nick at two hundred yards away. Cares not for life beyond a gun's eye view. Yet we compliment each other You are the peanut to my butter, Peach in my cream, Love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/26/2009 10:22:00 AM
Brought a smile to my day
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Date: 10/11/2009 5:53:00 PM
Sound as tho your male man is your cup of tea, Doris. Good to hear in this day and time so many divorces taking place. Congratulations and God's love to you both. Sincerely,Love, Moses
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Date: 10/11/2009 11:15:00 AM
Interesting point of view. Aren't all men like this ? Keep writing. Mom
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Date: 10/10/2009 10:34:00 PM
They say opposites attract, Doris. And while this hasn't worked for me, I'm glad you "the peanut to (your) butter!" Love, Carolyn
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