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Making Waves - Ziket

her hips a tidal wave crashing ~ the sea of debris 8.14.2020

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V. Deepa

Date: 8/27/2020 7:08:00 AM

Wow..great one liner Mo mam..:-) Your too clever.with compact creation's:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Much love:-)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/28/2020 5:01:00 AM

Thank you Lovely! Been embracing femininity lately ;), xomo

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/19/2020 9:33:00 AM

Lol I read this poem last night half asleep and could not figure it out, but now eyes wide open the penny dropped, like your big depth charger hitting the sea, leaving it in a mess, absolutely brilliant super Mo I seen a big guy nearly emptying the swimming pool once was hilarious cheers David

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/20/2020 10:57:00 AM

this reminds me of “it wasn’t the size of the sea than sank the ship, it was the motion of the ocean”... ;), xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/18/2020 5:47:00 PM

Hahahahahahah! Funniest ziket ever?! It's got my vote. ~ Laughing the night away! :) gw

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/19/2020 6:56:00 AM

Tee hee! Thank you dear! xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2020 4:40:00 PM

Faving this!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/19/2020 6:56:00 AM

<3<3<3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2020 4:38:00 PM

oh my, now THAT is one awesome picture!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/19/2020 6:56:00 AM

Thankya! xomo

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/17/2020 8:31:00 PM

Wonderful sensation of movement.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/19/2020 6:55:00 AM

Thank you Harry! xomo

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 8/17/2020 4:16:00 PM

A tsunami of movement of passion. Can i ask of you if you will P.T to please read my Cinderella Bell Ball poem. Cheers Ta

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/19/2020 6:55:00 AM

Thank you Chris, xomo!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/16/2020 1:32:00 PM

Ooh, provocative, alluring - and dangerous!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/16/2020 5:09:00 PM

We have power. (and I have butt envy) xomo <3

Jeff Connelly

Date: 8/16/2020 11:27:00 AM

First, Maureen I had to look up "ziket", thinking it's a cricket with acne; but as far as goes to this poem of yours- knowing you're Canadian and I'm not, I thought Obese United Statesian (I no longer misnomer AMERICANS since the USA has displayed lately a world majority of stupidity.) But in this poem I can see waves of McDonald extra large fry appetizers flowing with a Mc Double Cheese Bacon Melt, if this exists, washed away by two liters of some sugary pesticide soft drink. Super Size Me!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/18/2020 4:40:00 PM

geeeez., haters of americans. As if some of us WANT what's going on here??

Jeff Connelly
Date: 8/16/2020 5:38:00 PM

GODDESS, Maureen, I hate the US of A!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/16/2020 5:06:00 PM

Venus of Willendorf in the house! You know how it goes... fat bottomed girls you make the rockin’ world go ‘round. Those hips bearing more weight than kids~ consider yourself super sized ;),