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Making Sense

sensible version of yesterday's stress induced strange poem I'm all swirled up, whilst sat so still Jarred and jostled By jolts of half formed thoughts Tumultuous yet trying to be gentle With myself Who I vowed to be kind to As adrenaline travels from vein to brain Attacking little carriages Of troubles like the Highway Man Demanding fight, flight, freeze or fawn The new version of the tale For the anxious era

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Paige Hind

Date: 3/15/2023 1:50:00 PM

Stunning.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/15/2023 1:55:00 PM

Thank you :) The original version is What on Earth is this and is longer and stranger:D

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/14/2023 3:04:00 AM

I think we all have ying and yang at logger-heads in our brain at times. That's when I take to talking out loud, and argue with myself. The winner of the argument gets their way ! A pensive poem DD ( wow I wish I knew your name) I enjoyed your thoughts. Cheers

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/14/2023 3:41:00 AM

Thanks Wen, I'll whisper it to you in a message... I just keep it away from my poetry because I've written some very personal ones within the now hundreds x