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in heyday making caramel apples care-a-mel or car-mel that waters the mouth sticks to the teeth deliciously wrapped around a rotund apple sour or sweet my kids would unwrap each kraft caramel drop them into the pan and wait for them to melt we’d put the apples on a stick and dip them into the gooeyness place them on wax paper to set of course we might just go out to a festival and find the fancy kind but a kid must at least once make their own oh that first bite the one that sinks the teeth deep enough to go through the apple skin and find the snowyness of pulp that tangoes with the caramel delight in the heyday of autumn with my kids i could just taste the way it was back then 10/19/2022 Fall Flavors Poetry Contest Sponsor: Regina McIntosh Theme: Making caramel apples

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Date: 10/24/2022 11:32:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me vicariously feel how is it to "make caramel apples" with delight since I live in an "Autumnless" country. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2022 4:32:00 AM
Glad you got the experience “vicariously!” Thanks, sweet Beata! :)
Date: 10/24/2022 11:40:00 AM
Kim, your poem brought back so many sweet and delicious memories. I love caramel apples. The whimsy of this autumn treat is so perfectly described and I love the picture you draw of you and your family making autumn deliciousness! Congratulations on your win! Blessings of joy to you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2022 4:33:00 AM
Blessings of joy back at ya, my friend! Glad you enjoyed! Thank you!
Date: 10/24/2022 6:38:00 AM
Ah Kim. Again you fill the air with love and nostalgia. A beautiful family scene. Homemade are the best. :) Congratulations on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2022 4:35:00 AM
Thank you, Linda! :)
Date: 10/23/2022 6:20:00 PM
Oh how you brought me back to mom's apple coated apples, made with melted Kraft caramel and butter, everything tasted so much better then or was it the appetite of young, who knows, love this poem, Congrats dear Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2022 5:04:00 AM
And the fact that we didn’t have to think about it with those young bodies. So good. Thank you, Rose!
Date: 10/21/2022 1:12:00 PM
I have never made them myself, but I feel like I've (somewhat) experienced it after reading this, sounds like your kids were lucky to have had homemade ones :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2022 1:49:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle! They are so yummy!
Date: 10/20/2022 9:08:00 AM
You have given a caramel flavour to Autumn.... dear Kim. I love candy apples. I had it for the first time when I visited my brother in US . Your description of Caramel apple is mouth drooling ! All the best in the contest...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2022 1:49:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 10/20/2022 6:29:00 AM
You succeeded in taking me right into your kitchen... watching your happy family scene. And smiling. And salivating!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2022 1:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Becky!
Date: 10/19/2022 10:55:00 PM
Somehow I prefer apple pies. However your poem gives us a great recipe. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2022 5:15:00 AM
Thanks! You know what, my mom loved apple pies :)

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