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Make Me the Reason You Breathe

Inhale me so deeply that you remember my scent Breathe me into your body, allow me to linger a while Make me the part of you that you cannot live without the reason your heart beats, your pulse quickens a heady aura, too tempting to deny a kiss from my lips tell me it's my intoxicating bouquet that lights up your eyes Keep me alive inside of you until at last you come to realize without my provocative incense, you would surely perish incomplete in every sense without savoring my fragrance incapable of ever drawing another life-giving breath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/30/2017 10:08:00 PM
very passionate; I really enjoyed reading this one -JT
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Date: 4/26/2017 6:40:00 PM
beautiful, sensual and passionate Lin I am intoxicated by your awesome imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/28/2017 12:46:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Jan ;-)
Date: 4/23/2017 11:44:00 PM
Intoxicating indeed!!!...Lady Lin at her best...Hi, Lin...^WW^
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/24/2017 4:44:00 AM
And here is my champion, the Winged Warrior! How are you, dear one? Thank you for coming to read this, and for your most welcomed comments. Hugs.
Date: 4/23/2017 6:57:00 PM
Deja vu, again I am immersed in a romantic journey!! I like how Emile said it "swirling" :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/23/2017 7:39:00 PM
Thank you so much for journeying along with this one, Arthur.
Date: 4/23/2017 5:45:00 PM
This is a sensuous poem, swirling with the heady notions of intoxicating love. Your passion wraps itself around your words, and we are left unsated, and wanting more. Emile. #7
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/23/2017 6:37:00 PM
That's an exquisite review of the desire to be so needed that you want another's life to depend on your love. Thanks ever so much for your wonderful comments, Emile.
Date: 4/23/2017 2:42:00 PM
Very passionate Lin...True romanticism
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Date: 4/23/2017 6:35:00 PM
Thank you so very much for liking this one, Tim.
Date: 4/23/2017 10:29:00 AM
You've left me gasping for air.
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/23/2017 11:35:00 AM
Inhale, James. ;-) Thank you for such a splendid response.

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