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Make Me Dream

A thousand times I’ve wanted to share These euphoric sensations I feel inside But you’ll never see this longing heart Cause It’s far too easy to hide.. I hide I know that I want what I can’t have But girl your words can make me dream And when I get lost in your poetic lines Nothing that’s real is what it seems I close my eyes and almost feel your kiss Your tender touch takes my breath away That look you give, oh wow it draws me in Your scent, I’m speechless.. no words to say On your page your works lay me bare If not for guilt, my soul I’d confide God knows I’d sail across the furthest sea If in the end.. in you I’d hide, I’d hide And just like that your final line is read Your pen is down and I suddenly awake That mesmerizing face now just an avatar Give me more words before it’s too late Your next write my only hope to escape A thousand times I’ve wanted to share ~Lyric Man Note: Back from a long journey across the Pond. Missing you all was my energy source for this write. But were You a specific inspiration.. Yes, of course!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/7/2018 8:20:00 PM
Dreams are meant to take your heart to the skies, to leave you breathless. Oh my!! Your thoughts hold so many emotions, and they touch the page so softly. You can feel her so close, through words of poetry. Your heart beats tenderly, when you think of her. This is so beautiful and romantic. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/6/2018 1:08:00 AM
A refreshingly lovely poem so well writ
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Date: 9/29/2018 1:43:00 PM
Beautifully written. You have an amazing gift. The longing and the raw emotion in rhythmic fluidity is so powerful, it always draws me in. :)
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Date: 9/28/2018 3:53:00 PM
Very nicely done.
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Date: 9/21/2018 7:27:00 PM
beautifully penned Lm hope you will be back here soon - my muse has been on holiday I am hoping she is now returned:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2018 8:15:00 AM
Lm Your pen keeps on amazing!
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Date: 9/17/2018 7:52:00 PM
Love is so special in life in one soul and to loose it is hard. Beautiful write like always, Lyric Man. ~`* Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/13/2018 2:45:00 PM
Hello Lyric Man, this poem almost reads as a romance. I have enjoyed it. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 9/12/2018 6:33:00 PM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your work. I hope that your trip was wonderful ..Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 9/12/2018 7:52:00 AM
Beautiful romantic words, expressed so elegantly in your own style.. Great poem..
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Date: 9/12/2018 5:14:00 AM
We are trying; some great poets are here with plenty. This was a beautiful poem.
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Date: 9/11/2018 11:42:00 AM
How lovely this is Dave. You were missed. Welcome back my friend! : )
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Date: 9/11/2018 4:45:00 AM
been off soup as well, D... what a refreshing, charming melody!... you shine as always.. huggs
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Date: 9/10/2018 5:03:00 PM
'Give me more words before its too late' David .Its your words we're waiting for..We gave you ours..and I hope your inspirer did too ..Such a lovely and sweet poem this is..Its an amazing feeling when a poem..a book or anything ..anyone ..makes us dream..Loved this.Your poetry entertaines me.
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Date: 9/8/2018 9:55:00 PM
seems like the perfect poem for a Lyric Man everyone glad you are back.
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Date: 9/7/2018 10:59:00 AM
I was wondering why you were M.I.A. for a short time. Hope your time away was nice. Welcome Back. Oh, and I almost forgot...awesome write as usual, LM.
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Date: 9/7/2018 9:49:00 AM
Welcome back Lyric man! Nice new beginning poem.
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Date: 9/7/2018 8:36:00 AM
Keep dreaming dreams...Welcome back...All the best to you my friend...
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Date: 9/7/2018 8:09:00 AM
A lovely romantic verse Dave, hope you had a good trip. Tom
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Date: 9/7/2018 6:56:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem LM..you write romance beautifully..well done..welcome back!
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Date: 9/6/2018 11:40:00 PM
Very nice, rheumatic and flowing. I enjoyed it immensely!
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Date: 9/6/2018 10:47:00 PM
Love your inspiration! We missed you too, Poet Lyric!
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