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Make Me

Lay me down, tie me up Dirty whispers in the dark Love me, and I'll tease you Choke me, and I'll please you Make me bleed, make me see the light I won't go down without a fight Your tender touch, to make me moan It won't take much Let me work you, take me all the way That'a the way I'll stay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/30/2015 11:42:00 AM
it would seem that I have found a freak....how much truth knows the words you speak....because if you knew what I understand....then no pretending will be displayed in front of this man....;)....but I likes that one right there....lol
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Date: 10/6/2015 9:02:00 AM
Freak indeed :) -TJ
Date: 8/11/2015 11:00:00 AM
Trinity, enjoyed reading today.... SKAT
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Date: 2/26/2015 7:05:00 PM
Yikes !!!!!!!!! Somebody hide me ;) Awesome write dear poet ! Have a wonderful night..............much love, james
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Date: 2/26/2015 7:31:00 PM
Haha I thought I would probably get a yikes. Thank you so much J. -TJ
Date: 2/26/2015 7:00:00 PM
Hey Tb,erotic in a nice way...like the way it moves..thanks Tonytoca
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Date: 2/26/2015 7:32:00 PM
Well thank you. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :) -TJ

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