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Make Love To Me In That Ancient Place -Silent Love

Make Love To Me In That Ancient Place - (Silent Love) My love and I are from another world We came from a cave or well Well within ourselves so deep That poured purity of being within, creating skin We now can touch each other in the fever This all took time of course It formed thousands of miles beneath the earth With molten red desire moving over passion Over mountains rolling to create our souls Forming love itself At God’s command, from simple elements, He gave us hands To hold and love each other To bond with nature in the secret sacred garden No other world or living thing distracts us The hidden love so silent on the soundless kiss It could not be missed by anyone but us The fabric of life is there still measured Clinging to each other Glowing in the dark In that ancient place 10/21/14 Make Love To Me In That Ancient Place – Poetry Contest

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/30/2014 1:41:00 PM

oh Earl i missed this stunning write with its wonderful imagery - my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/30/2014 1:58:00 PM

Hi Jan. I hope things are good with you. Thank you so much. I am surprised I even placed. I was afraid this poem might be too abstract and perhaps not grounded enough in the reality of the Soup audience. There are many of my works that I do not post here for that reason. I'm glad you appreciate it. Thanks. Have a pleasant day. Earl

Earl Schumacker

Date: 7/8/2014 7:48:00 AM

Good morning Ravi, Thank you so much for commenting. I've been trying to keep my poems simple, with relatable images that are easy on the mind and soul. I'm glad you enjoyed it as well. Have a great day. Earl

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/8/2014 3:45:00 AM

"The hidden love so silent on the soundless kiss" well said. I enjoyed reading your poem. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/30/2014 2:06:00 PM

Hi Ravi. I sent you a response regarding this poem on 7/08/14. My records indicate that the message may not have gone through. Sorry for that. I always respond. Here it is again. I hope it goes through. "Good morning Ravi, Thank you so much for commenting. I've been trying to keep my poems simple, with relatable images that are easy on the mind and soul. I'm glad you enjoyed it as well. Have a great day. Earl"