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Majesty

Noble beauty the landscape embraces Dignifying these mountain faces Trembling water begins to ripple Through this divinely painted oasis Off in the distance an eagle takes flight Circling left then gliding right Dipping down to catch and feed Soaring into the broad daylight Nature's majesty here is so rare Bejeweled shards of crisp,clean air Breathe in deeply and heal your soul In this magnificence lose all care for contest"Use Rubaiyat Form" sponsored by John Freeman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/29/2011 2:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/27/2011 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Deb
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:37:00 AM
Beautiful write Deb on magnificence of nature.Many Congrats on super your win. Love, gautami
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:03:00 AM
A classic Deb, Majesty so rare. Great to see you at the top with this lovely poem. Congratulations on your special entry's second place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/26/2011 7:48:00 PM
You took me to such a lovely place. congrats on your big win. BG
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Date: 4/26/2011 3:28:00 PM
You painted this divine oasis so vividly in your words, Deb. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:10:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your 2nd place win in John's contest with this perfect poem using new form.. enjoy your top spot with luv..
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your second place win DEB (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:26:00 AM
Very nice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/26/2011 10:47:00 AM
Beautiful, Deb. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 4/26/2011 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on 2nd place win with this beauty. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:07:00 AM
how graceful this one is , deb... just finished mine as well.. so healing; funny i used the same word! winning's best to you! :) huggs, nette
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