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Majestic Heights

The night eclipses all other nights Bright and shining in the moons eye Beaming down upon our short ride Through downtown and into the district Love floats above all other emotions A ring I find out of my heart to bestow Onto her finger of life long journeys Not a drop of mist save her eyes formed Her heart gulped with joy as mine shown Elation is what’s between our faces Riding the horse drawn carriage Brings life to its highest points Shooting our tenderness of the moment Shining from the moonlight above There’s always a tingle of love Whenever that moment is thought of Love brought upon majestic heights A kingdom of joy resting on us With her ultimately saying, “Yes, I will”
Russell Sivey Contest: BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT Sponsor: nette onclaud 11/22/2013

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Date: 11/29/2013 10:27:00 PM
Ahhh...yes...a moment always remembered by those in love...written so well Russell...congratulations
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Date: 11/29/2013 7:25:00 PM
A cherished memory! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/29/2013 12:11:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: - BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT / / Nette Onclaud contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/25/2013 3:49:00 PM
beautiful, romantic write, my friend
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Date: 11/23/2013 9:34:00 PM
So romantic, so lovely, beautiful and so sweet poem this is my dear friend Russell taking every reader to the zenith of that majestic heights;))). A winner for me. Wishing you all the best. TYSM again! More blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/23/2013 3:50:00 PM
My dear friend, Russell, you are such a romantic gentleman. With poems like this no lady could ever say NO! a SEVEN! Good luck! Excellent poem!
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Date: 11/23/2013 5:01:00 AM
Ahhh!!! Romantic work that you have penned..Reads like winning material to me.,.Way to go..I appreciate your faithfulness in reviewing my work..Sara
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Date: 11/22/2013 11:16:00 PM
oh, it was the day she said YES>HOw wonderful, Russell.
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