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Maid In Black

She walks alone, the twilight hours when earth and sky are one, between the headstones and the flowers, hid from the dreaded sun. Naught bestirs, no sound disturbs nor yet a shadow falls, before this maid, with soundless words, her one true lover calls. But he has fallen long ago in bygone fields of war, a hundred years she’s trod this path, mayhap, a hundred more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/1/2019 5:56:00 PM
Hello Keth Logon, She is searching for her lost love. So sad. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 11/8/2016 8:23:00 PM
This is indeed a haunting.
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Keith Logan
Date: 11/8/2016 9:50:00 PM
I have read that rhyming poetry cannot be serious.
Date: 10/16/2016 2:13:00 PM
Spooky, Love this write :)
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Keith Logan
Date: 11/8/2016 9:43:00 PM
I am glad you enjoyed this. It was fun to write.
Date: 10/5/2016 10:19:00 AM
needs more
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Keith Logan
Date: 10/11/2016 3:49:00 AM
Better to leave the reader wanting more than wishing for less.
Date: 10/4/2016 11:42:00 PM
Lovely words Keith... /|\
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Keith Logan
Date: 10/11/2016 3:47:00 AM
'Twas fun to write.
Date: 10/3/2016 2:41:00 PM
Grear title, Keith. The imagery is amazing. A high 7....Linda
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Keith Logan
Date: 10/11/2016 3:45:00 AM
A seven! I am humbled by such a gift.
Date: 10/2/2016 5:05:00 PM
Wow! I can just imagine and empathize with how she must have felt/feel. A haunting poem, Keith. Carole
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Keith Logan
Date: 10/11/2016 3:44:00 AM
Thank you. The lass who posted those images of herself deserves much of the credit for inspiring the write.
Date: 9/30/2016 8:09:00 AM
A fantastic poem Keith...loved the tale
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Keith Logan
Date: 9/30/2016 2:33:00 PM
Thank you. I'm glad you liked this little tale of lost love.
Date: 9/30/2016 7:29:00 AM
A good Halloween work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Keith Logan
Date: 9/30/2016 8:00:00 AM
I am pleased that you garnered some joy from this simple tale.
Date: 9/30/2016 6:57:00 AM
The title is absolutely fabulous to go with your sad ghostly tale Keith:-) hugs Jan xx
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Keith Logan
Date: 9/30/2016 7:58:00 AM
Thank you. If I remember correctly it was the title that came to me first and the rest of the work just flowed.

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