magpie spring gem

nest building in early spring ~ nothing useful found she settles for bling
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G  Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 8:20 AM
Surprise entry into top 100 new poems list! #2 well done :D
G  Avatar
March 22, 2026 at 7:31 AM
Great to see this one the winners list David - I enjoyed how it covers so many bases: uplifting, pun, cute, rhyme - allowing for expansive thought streams from just a few words, as is your usual. Congratulations on your placement :)
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 22, 2026 at 10:35 AM
Hey LG, always great to get some recognition for my monokus, I’m certainly delighted you see the mechanics behind this one, there was always a little more depth than immediately meets the eye intended, thanks so much, cheers David
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2026 at 4:49 PM
I really like yours, David
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 20, 2026 at 4:52 PM
Thanks Andrea, the algorithm did too, a very surprising POTD, cheers David
George Avatar
March 14, 2026 at 4:59 AM
Sweet rhyming and great observation. Congratulations on your POTD dear David.
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 14, 2026 at 5:34 AM
Thanks so much Valsa, my simple Monoku was just waiting to be written, glad I beat other poets to it, lol! Cheers David
Seeker Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 11:33 PM
Bling it is then! Congratulations on POTD, David
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 12, 2026 at 2:00 AM
Authentic bling if there is such a thing, bling it on, cheers David
Daniels Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 10:47 PM
This is a Winner ! Congrats on POTD. I love your acute insight. Blessings, Sir.
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 12, 2026 at 1:59 AM
Thanks Ghairo, I perhaps got lucky here, was one of the quickest Monoku’s I’ve ever written, serendipitous insight lol! Cheers David
La France Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 10:13 PM
David, beautiful and congratulations on receiving POTD ~
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 12, 2026 at 1:56 AM
Hey Constance, thanks you so much for kind comments, I’m totally delighted with this one, cheers David
Nicole Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 5:36 PM
It sounds like she's more unprepared, than prepared. Bling may make you sing, but, that's about all it does. Congratulations David, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 7:06 PM
Well spotted Brandy, not enough nest material at hand, so I’m guessing the magpie will settle for anything that looks cheap and gaudy rather than go back with nothing at all, Such industrious creatures that they are! Thank you for congrats and nice comments, cheers David
Anaya Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 12:28 PM
It must be why they have iridescent wings. Congratulations on Poem of the day, David! Always a pleasure reading. Cheers ha ha "Lithium" just came on the radio~Sending aloha spirit
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 3:38 PM
Go for it, and a garlic dip to top it all off lol!
Anaya Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 2:20 PM
Ah, I'll have the hot sticky sweet mulled wine~& chips!
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 12:36 PM
Very strange I’ve just been listening to it too on my playlist, lyrics are simple yet incredibly soul piercing, ooh! iridescent wings, yes they do when pretty close up, time for my real daily dose of lithium now lol! Cheers David
Alhemaidy Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 11:07 AM
Hi David :-) Congratulations on nice POTD!
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 12:12 PM
Nice of you to stop by with congrats AA, I’m delighted with the honour cheers David!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 10:07 AM
Congrats on POTD! Bling it is!
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 12:10 PM
Bling on the wing, as magpies cannot sing, but they sure know how to chatter, lol! Cheers David
Goldsmith Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 10:03 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "magpie spring gem" Monoku write. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 12:08 PM
Heya Paula, I honestly just hoped for a good placement in the contest, POTD was a big surprise this morning, cheers David
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 9:33 AM
I love the sparkling simplicity of this gem. Congratulations on POTD honours David, cheers! xomo
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 12:03 PM
Hey there Super Mo! Simplicity indeed, it’s strange that sometimes we miss the obvious, even when it’s glaring at us, I got lucky here, cheers David
Rodgers Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 7:35 AM
Hello David, why did I know this was going to be POTD, a little Magpie told me so. Congrats David! Blessings Daniel
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 8:00 AM
Haha! I’ve no idea what goes on in the POTD algorithm, I didn’t even get a Fave for this one Daniel, and I definitely didn’t offer Admin a bribe. So I just gotta roll with it, and put it all down to that little Birdie lol! Cheers David
Etgen-Baker Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 6:06 AM
a delightful poem. congrats on your POTD designation.
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 6:56 AM
Thanks Sara, always great when these ones come along, I’m delighted, cheers David
Winter Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 3:53 AM
Lovely! Congratulations on POTD! Best, Anne
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 5:52 AM
Hey there Anne, thanks so much for stopping by with congratulations, cheers David
Kitchin Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 2:46 AM
David, a charming poem. Congratulations on POTD.
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 3:23 AM
Not many of my posts are labeled as charming lol! But hey I’m delighted this one brings a little charm to PS today, even if a little blingy, thanks so much for kind words, cheers David
Lane Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 1:58 AM
Feathering the nest has its rewards… this one’s bling is POTD. Congratulations and cheers!
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 2:06 AM
Heya Lin, I’m sure we all have a little bling in our nests lol! and possibly bits of it will end up in the magpies home eventually :) thanks for stopping by with congrats, cheers David
G  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 1:40 AM
Woohoo! POTD! Congratulations - how fitting this attracted a shiny reward :)
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 2:02 AM
Woohoo yes indeed, I’m covered in bling today lol! I’ll buy a lotto later, and pick the numbers myself ;) Cheers David
Allison Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 1:37 AM
many congrats on POTD David, this is a real gem indeed:-) hugs Jan x
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 1:59 AM
Always a big surprise to receive POTD honours Jan, sometimes our little gems are the most obvious, anyone could’ve written this one, but I’m glad I spotted it first, (finders keepers) lol, cheers David
Cunningham Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 1:32 AM
Back with congratulations David on today's POTD honour. Tom
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 1:52 AM
I always hoped this one would do well in the contest Tom, and never even considered POTD, so I’m totally made up now, thanks for the return visit and congrats, cheers David
bard Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 1:34 AM
Congratulations on POTD. Magpies in Aussie in spring are most aggressive. I have blood seep from my head when I was young . My son would put a collender on his head to protect himself from a swooping nesting magpie.
bard Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 1:31 AM
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 1:50 AM
They can indeed be vicious at certain times of the year Douglas, that colander is probably doing both jobs protecting and attracting them all at once lol! Thanks for stopping by, cheers David
Jones Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 12:59 AM
lol! This is delightful! Congratulations David on potw!
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 1:44 AM
And I am absolutely delighted my magpie spring gem got POTD, thanks so much Karen, cheers David
G  Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 10:06 PM
Ahh this is excellent, yet seemed to trip off the tongue! Magpies did once bully my cat :( interesting to consider their instincts to collect shiny things though - excellent entry for the contest :)
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 1:36 AM
They really are fearless and ferocious creatures, maybe my one was just collecting souvenirs, hey you be careful and stand guard over all those shiny trophies you’ve been gathering, lol! Thanks so much Miss LG, cheers David
Lane Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 3:12 PM
Those stinkers would rather steal gems than be one but I suppose there is good to be found in lots of things if we look hard enough. They already have to live bearing an awful name. You have a talent at writing about mundane things and giving them credence ;-)
Lane Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 4:14 PM
I heard about that, too… through the grapevine ;-)
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 3:35 PM
Heya Lin, those poor magpies are victims of their own success, I don’t think they care one bit what we call them, once they get away with the goodies lol! Credence rules! Cheers David
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