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'magical Poetry'

when your eyes caught mine I knew I was lost and found tacit LOVE remain the same umbrella provided the shade and FUN chilled drinks didn’t help to offset the heat produced our lips connected, pure bliss the beach has gone quiet now just us and our POETRY we are still making magic this time with our lips by: Wilma N. Neels 050620111710 Contest : Fun & Frolic (3 forms) 3rd Place

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Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/25/2011 2:58:00 PM

Nicely written indeed. Romantic and poetic. Love, Robert.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/26/2011 5:49:00 PM

Romantic and sweet with flare. :)

Dalila Agtani

Date: 6/19/2011 11:26:00 PM

I love this poem of yours Wilma. Poetry is always magical between two people in love I think! Thank you for sharing, also I feel honored for reading my poem. Dalila

John Freeman

Date: 6/13/2011 7:42:00 PM

Wilma, great to see you in a top spot. Congratulations on your honored placement. Agape, Moses

Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/10/2011 12:42:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your delightful win in this contest of Linda's..love, gautami

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2011 2:25:00 PM

Very creative work..Enjoyed..Congrats..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 6/9/2011 10:25:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win, Wilma : )

Joseph Osita

Date: 6/9/2011 10:14:00 AM

Many congrats on your well deserved win in linda marie's contest

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2011 6:55:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Fun and Frolic" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/8/2011 7:14:00 PM

ongratulations on the third place win in the contest, Wilma

Rick Parise

Date: 6/8/2011 5:34:00 PM

Great work Wilma.........quite sexy~nothing better than a good kiss.......ENJOYED~God bless you!~^Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/8/2011 5:05:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your third place win in my contest luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/5/2011 11:38:00 PM

oh, smackeroo with those smoochy blissy write, missy! hoo-wee I stand by what I say, umm singsong(?) somebody's inspired still ;) I am sure Linda will love this one! :D

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/5/2011 6:41:00 PM

Whata fantastic poetic expressions, Wilma, enjoyed the last one with nice visual

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/5/2011 2:47:00 PM

I see someone has an early Valentine, Wilma. How sweeet is this romantic treat! The title says it all. Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/5/2011 12:42:00 PM

You don't need the beach or drinks to make magic when lips connect, Wilma. Those who are lucky enough to find relationships like this are truly blessed. Beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/5/2011 10:13:00 AM

oh so awesome Wilma as u parallel each emotion with something so grand.. so enticing.. good luck in the contest if for any of them..it is truly magical poetry my friend..with luv..

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/5/2011 9:26:00 AM

A wonderful Tanka Wilma. I enjoyed the read. Best to you~ Caryl

Kash Poet

Date: 6/5/2011 9:14:00 AM

Lips sure do magic:)Best wishes:)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/5/2011 8:14:00 AM

Warm magic is the cornerstone to great Poetry... And your talent is just the cherry on top....hugs and love your way.... I just saw your Blog, congrats on your year here.. your one of main reasons I love this ste....thank you for you....Michael