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Magical Moonlight

Watching moonbeams dance Upon an inky blue sea Scintillating shadows sway A gentle breeze blows Wispy clouds obscure the moon My moonlight waltz is over Moonlight delight contest Sponsored by Russell Sivey Written on 09 07 17

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Date: 1/26/2021 7:44:00 PM
Congratulations, Jan!
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Date: 1/26/2021 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" Enjoy your win/day with blessings.............
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Date: 10/31/2017 5:02:00 PM
Very beautiful picture...
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2017 5:26:00 PM
Thanks Angel:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/13/2017 10:07:00 PM
Gorgeous work, Jan - love this very much ... blessings and congrats on your win, my friend! :-) <3
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2017 2:06:00 AM
many thanks Greg:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/12/2017 12:23:00 AM
I'm happy to see this rated high on the list Jan. Big Congrats on your win! Breathtaking imagery! : )
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/12/2017 6:08:00 PM
many thanks Connie i have been on holiday and am so behind on soup I don't think i will catch up:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 9/9/2017 11:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2017 5:59:00 AM
Thank you so much:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/9/2017 2:00:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful 2nd place, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/11/2017 5:58:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/9/2017 10:33:00 AM
Way to go Jan, congratulations.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2017 5:58:00 AM
cheers Charlie:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/9/2017 10:04:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win ~`*
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2017 5:57:00 AM
Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/9/2017 8:40:00 AM
Congrats, Jan!
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2017 5:57:00 AM
Thanks Dale:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 9/9/2017 8:25:00 AM
Back to Congrats!!! Jan...yahoo!!!...^WW^
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2017 4:23:00 PM
Cheers ^WW ^ :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/9/2017 5:51:00 AM
Great write, Jan. Noticed you dropped in some alliteration, like I did!! Congrats on your win! Not seen you on my page for a while, so hope you stop by soon ;) . Regards, John.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2017 4:22:00 PM
I love using alliteration john:-) sorry I am so behind at the moment we are on holiday and the connection is a bit flaky and I am chilling and sightseeing too:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/7/2017 8:00:00 PM
Oh just magnificent Jan! Your poem is alive with beautiful imagery, especially your third line. Amazing Sedoka! Good luck! :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/8/2017 1:18:00 PM
thank you for your lovely comment Susan:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/7/2017 6:42:00 PM
Nicely done, great imagery , Jan, luck in the contest Hugs Eve ~`*
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/8/2017 1:17:00 PM
thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/7/2017 3:33:00 PM
I can see the image of the moonbeams waltzing, This is very well written and should be a winner in my book. Good luck in the contest.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2017 4:03:00 PM
Thanks so much Janis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/7/2017 2:16:00 PM
Very lovely Jan...I could picture it dance
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2017 4:03:00 PM
Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/7/2017 8:46:00 AM
Beautifully portrayed my friend...best of luck...god bless...^WW^
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2017 9:56:00 AM
Cheers ^WW^ :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/6/2017 11:33:00 PM
Reminds me of a song by Van Morrison - "Moondance" Nice job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2017 9:55:00 AM
Thats a lovely track Matthew:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/6/2017 6:46:00 PM
Lovely, Jan--a winning poem!
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2017 9:50:00 AM
I hope Russell likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/6/2017 6:16:00 PM
Delightful Jan, just lovely :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2017 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Gary I enjoyed the challenge:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/6/2017 5:17:00 PM
I love the Moonlight Waltz, not familiar with Sedoka form, good luck for the contest, regards, Kevin
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2017 9:48:00 AM
I've only written 2 others so thought I'd try for this contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/6/2017 5:15:00 PM
Hi Jan , love this one lots of movement in your words feels very alive ::)))))))hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2017 9:47:00 AM
Thanks niall:-) hugs Jan xx

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