Faye Gibson Poet Alliteration

Magical May Meadowland

Flowers flourish flavoring the field,
wild waifs that wave and whirl and whip
beneath the wind's wanton waltzing ways.
Bucolic bees buzz blooms and sip
sweet sage, sacramental savorings.
A halcyon habitat, a happy home,
for blessing birds and bees and blossoms,
majestic, magical May meadowland, my own.

Copyright, July 6, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson

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Katie Miller September 10, 2014 at 3:47 AM Despite my own personal taste, I find comfort in the warmth of your poems. Thank you, Faye, for inspiring me in ways I never thought possible! You make it look so easy...

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri July 13, 2014 at 4:02 AM Aha congrats on a greater win faye! Awesome diction and imagery alliteration. Faye Gibson July 15, 2014 at 6:10 PM Thank you so much for the nice comments.

Mohan Chutani July 12, 2014 at 10:53 PM Faye, thanks for showing us your May meadow land, wafting with colours and cool breeze. Mohan Faye Gibson July 15, 2014 at 6:10 PM Thanks again, Mohan.

Arlene Smith July 12, 2014 at 8:05 PM Congrats on a great win, Faye! Hugs. Arlene Faye Gibson July 15, 2014 at 6:11 PM Thank you, Arlene, for stopping by.

Seren Roberts July 12, 2014 at 7:09 PM Congrats on a great write Faye I loved it ....Seren Faye Gibson July 15, 2014 at 6:11 PM Thanks, Seren.

A.E. Rivenbark July 12, 2014 at 5:20 PM Gorgeous imagery :D Congratulations on your well deserved win.

Joyce Johnson July 12, 2014 at 3:14 PM I enjoyed your poem. well done. Congratulations on win. Love, Joyce Faye Gibson July 15, 2014 at 6:08 PM Thanks for stopping by, Joyce.

Barbara Gorelick July 12, 2014 at 8:54 AM I love your meadowland theme. Congrats on your win..I so enjoyed reading all of these.. BG Faye Gibson July 12, 2014 at 2:32 PM Thank you, Barbara, This was a fun contest.

Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2014 at 8:10 AM I'm not surprised to see this one on the list. Congrats. Faye Gibson July 12, 2014 at 2:32 PM Thank you, Richard. You are always so encouraging.

Jan Allison July 12, 2014 at 6:15 AM this paints a wonderful picture a worthy winner. hugs Jan x Faye Gibson July 12, 2014 at 2:31 PM Thanks, Jan. Appreciate the kind comments.

Paul Callus July 12, 2014 at 5:18 AM A lovely picture of meadowland painted through alliteration. Well done! much enjoyed, Faye. Congrats on a merited win. // paul Faye Gibson July 12, 2014 at 2:30 PM Thank you, Paul...appreciate the positive comments.

Dr.Ram Mehta July 12, 2014 at 5:10 AM Nice picture worded well, Faye, congrats on the win in my contest, Faye Faye Gibson July 12, 2014 at 2:30 PM Thank you, Dr. Mehta, for the placement in your contest...and your kind comments.

John Michaels July 10, 2014 at 5:11 AM Lovely poem, very well-written. Best of luck for the competition! Faye Gibson July 12, 2014 at 2:29 PM Thank you, John.

Richard Lamoureux July 8, 2014 at 8:57 AM Alliteration aptly accomplished. Simply splendid!

Ziad Gadou July 8, 2014 at 3:45 AM fantastic job! Faye Gibson July 8, 2014 at 6:33 PM Thank you, Ziad. Post more poems so we can comment on yours!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 7, 2014 at 4:38 AM wow! this lovely picture Faye.. :) Faye Gibson July 8, 2014 at 6:29 PM Thank you again, dear Olive.