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Magical May Meadowland

Flowers flourish flavoring the field,
wild waifs that wave and whirl and whip
beneath the wind's wanton waltzing ways.
Bucolic bees buzz blooms and sip
sweet sage, sacramental savorings.
A halcyon habitat, a happy home,
for blessing birds and bees and blossoms,
majestic, magical May meadowland, my own.

Copyright, July 6, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson

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Katie Miller Date: 9/10/2014 3:47:00 AM Despite my own personal taste, I find comfort in the warmth of your poems. Thank you, Faye, for inspiring me in ways I never thought possible! You make it look so easy... Login to Reply

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 7/13/2014 4:02:00 AM Aha congrats on a greater win faye! Awesome diction and imagery alliteration. Login to Reply Faye Gibson Date: 7/15/2014 6:10:00 PM Thank you so much for the nice comments.

Mohan Chutani Date: 7/12/2014 10:53:00 PM Faye, thanks for showing us your May meadow land, wafting with colours and cool breeze. Mohan Login to Reply Faye Gibson Date: 7/15/2014 6:10:00 PM Thanks again, Mohan.

Arlene Smith Date: 7/12/2014 8:05:00 PM Congrats on a great win, Faye! Hugs. Arlene Login to Reply Faye Gibson Date: 7/15/2014 6:11:00 PM Thank you, Arlene, for stopping by.

Seren Roberts Date: 7/12/2014 7:09:00 PM Congrats on a great write Faye I loved it ....Seren Login to Reply Faye Gibson Date: 7/15/2014 6:11:00 PM Thanks, Seren.

A.E. Rivenbark Date: 7/12/2014 5:20:00 PM Gorgeous imagery :D Congratulations on your well deserved win. Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 7/12/2014 3:14:00 PM I enjoyed your poem. well done. Congratulations on win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply Faye Gibson Date: 7/15/2014 6:08:00 PM Thanks for stopping by, Joyce.

Barbara Gorelick Date: 7/12/2014 8:54:00 AM I love your meadowland theme. Congrats on your win..I so enjoyed reading all of these.. BG Login to Reply Faye Gibson Date: 7/12/2014 2:32:00 PM Thank you, Barbara, This was a fun contest.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/12/2014 8:10:00 AM I'm not surprised to see this one on the list. Congrats. Login to Reply Faye Gibson Date: 7/12/2014 2:32:00 PM Thank you, Richard. You are always so encouraging.

Jan Allison Date: 7/12/2014 6:15:00 AM this paints a wonderful picture a worthy winner. hugs Jan x Login to Reply Faye Gibson Date: 7/12/2014 2:31:00 PM Thanks, Jan. Appreciate the kind comments.

Paul Callus Date: 7/12/2014 5:18:00 AM A lovely picture of meadowland painted through alliteration. Well done! much enjoyed, Faye. Congrats on a merited win. // paul Login to Reply Faye Gibson Date: 7/12/2014 2:30:00 PM Thank you, Paul...appreciate the positive comments.

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/12/2014 5:10:00 AM Nice picture worded well, Faye, congrats on the win in my contest, Faye Login to Reply Faye Gibson Date: 7/12/2014 2:30:00 PM Thank you, Dr. Mehta, for the placement in your contest...and your kind comments.

John Michaels Date: 7/10/2014 5:11:00 AM Lovely poem, very well-written. Best of luck for the competition! Login to Reply Faye Gibson Date: 7/12/2014 2:29:00 PM Thank you, John.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/8/2014 8:57:00 AM Alliteration aptly accomplished. Simply splendid! Login to Reply

Ziad Gadou Date: 7/8/2014 3:45:00 AM fantastic job! Login to Reply Faye Gibson Date: 7/8/2014 6:33:00 PM Thank you, Ziad. Post more poems so we can comment on yours!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/7/2014 4:38:00 AM wow! this lovely picture Faye.. :) Login to Reply Faye Gibson Date: 7/8/2014 6:29:00 PM Thank you again, dear Olive.