magical dream

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Constance La France.

Written, January 09, 2024
For the contest, Up To You
Sponsor, Brian Strand

Iron Railings NJ | Build Wrought Iron Railings in NJ | (973) 481-5550

I imagine angels in azure blue gowns with white wispy wings and flowers woven in their hair saints gather in emerald cloaks & rich red, pink, rose, & yellow with edging of embroidery I see a grand temple made of gold bricks where birds of all kinds fly free the landscape beyond is muted greens & blues on the temple walls rich flower tapestry hang among grand paintings both sensual & elaborate in rich hues the subjects have a erotic appeal & distant coolness then, a red curtain falls in my dream & I wake to a sun dappled room

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Karen Jones

Date: 1/10/2024 4:35:00 AM

Dripping with colorful imagery this is magical indeed! Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 1/11/2024 5:39:00 PM

Karen, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings, Constance

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/9/2024 6:16:00 PM

Constance, this is an enchanting journey through your vivid imagination. Your portrayal of angels, saints, and a majestic temple creates a mesmerizing landscape filled with rich colors and intricate details. The contrast between the serene setting and the sensual allure of the paintings adds depth to the dream. Your ability to craft such a vivid and evocative dream world is truly magical! - Blessings, Daniel

Constance La France
Date: 1/10/2024 12:30:00 AM

Daniel, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and compliment, blessings, Constance

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/9/2024 4:05:00 PM

what a beautiful dream, Constance! I want to dream in that manner :-) I loved the vivid imagery throughout your poem and was taken by these words: where birds of all kinds fly free the landscape beyond is muted greens & blues on the temple walls rich flower tapestry hang As I read those words I imaged myself in an almost mystical place. Enjoyed...have a great evening, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 1/10/2024 12:31:00 AM

Sara, thank you so much for the compliment and lovely comment, appreciate, Constance

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/9/2024 3:21:00 PM

Hello Constance, A beautiful dream. A dream to remember. Love & Friendship /Darlene/ Happy New Year. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/10/2024 10:25:00 AM

Hello Constance, you are welcome. blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Constance La France
Date: 1/10/2024 12:32:00 AM

Darlene, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, blessings, Constance