Magical

catching a long overdue nap with her exuberant rambunctious two-year old one two three how divine just a few winks he's back to the sweetest angel ever Submitted on April 25, 2019 for contest TETRACTYS THIS sponsored by CHARLES MESSINA - RANKED 2ND

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2019 2:42:00 PM

Hmmm, I could never even get MINE to take naps!! Congrats for your win with this sweet poem.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/4/2019 3:30:00 PM

Fun times... thanks, Andrea.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/4/2019 8:56:00 AM

Hi Line, You took me down memory lane with this one. I remember those days very well. Congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/4/2019 9:55:00 AM

Thank you so much, Alexis.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2019 8:17:00 AM

- Congratulations :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/4/2019 8:49:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine.

Charles Messina

Date: 5/4/2019 7:51:00 AM

Such a lovely write, Line. I love this....so many awesome writes for this contest and this is surely one. Hugs Charlie

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/4/2019 8:49:00 AM

Thanks, Charles. Much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2019 1:55:00 PM

- Yes, how divine Line - Beautiful written - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2019 3:18:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sunshine. Most appreciated.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 4/25/2019 8:53:00 AM

This is a winner for me! Elegant and evocative as always :) I have a 3 year old granddaughter... and "like magic" (sigh) is true of the nap and the whole experience of spending time with them.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/25/2019 9:15:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, PS.