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Magic Words

Magic Words He practiced his magic out there in the yard on the crest of this fine summer’s eve A trick he had found waiting there in his heart, he knew he just had to believe For there was a girl who he found oh so pretty on a front porch right there on his street And all he could hope was that magic would help him, if only a chance just to meet He set up his props, a box made of cardboard and showed it was empty inside Then held up a scarf, tinted blue like the heavens and still he had nothing to hide He thought good and hard of his learned incantation, the words he so soon would recite There on the lawn, a bright sun was shining, hoping he would get it right Then looked her direction and grinned when he noticed that she was now looking at him He put on his hat and rolled up his sleeves, it’s time for the spell to begin With a wave of his hand, he made her appear from the box with a scarf colored blue Just three magic words, she needed to hear when he whispered to her, I love you

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Date: 1/30/2017 7:07:00 AM
Oh to be that magician! Very well told, Chris! You certainly are a magician with words my friend!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2017 8:50:00 AM
Thanks so very much Rick. Just having a little hocus pocus fun.
Date: 1/28/2017 2:55:00 AM
Really enjoyed this. Love hearing these magic words myself.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2017 8:50:00 AM
They are magical, aren't they? :) Thanks so very much Elizabeth
Date: 1/28/2017 1:06:00 AM
Very sweet..this magician and girl's tale.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2017 8:49:00 AM
Thanks so much for stopping by to read my poem Charmaine, I guess my spell worked. :)
Date: 1/27/2017 3:18:00 PM
Hi Chris, I really enjoyed this sweet write. It gave me a warm feeling and put a smile on my face. The end line was so adorable. Where can get a magic set such as this? A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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Alexis Y.
Date: 1/27/2017 4:13:00 PM
That would be fantastic: -)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/27/2017 3:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Alexis, just a fun little write to try to liven up a slow afternoon on soup. I am thrilled you liked it. Hmmm, where can you get one, I'll lend you mine. :)
Date: 1/27/2017 1:49:00 PM
I might have to borrow my youngest daughter magic set she got from Santa. Good one Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 1/27/2017 2:29:00 PM
I hope she doesn't mind. :) Thanks so much Tim.
Date: 1/27/2017 1:23:00 PM
Fine story writing Chris. Perfect ending, exceptional rhyme structure.Unique. The poem is a pun within a pun. Surprised to see me as a first comment...
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 1/27/2017 1:40:00 PM
:-)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/27/2017 1:29:00 PM
Thanks so much Keith, not surprised, happy you did come by first. I appreciate that.

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