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You wipe away trickling tears, but they reappear with ease. And each drop is laced with fears, for lies no longer appease. With your future drained of hope, happiness has slipped your grip. And you now struggle to cope, suppressing a trembling lip. Anxious to embrace your fate, innocence dons trusting eyes. And frustration fosters hate, camouflaging truth with lies. Aware of the pain love brings, anxieties start to climb. And you dream of magic wings, to escape the hands of time. From the fringes of disdain, emptiness consumes your day. For abandoned once again, love fades, yet heartaches stay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/17/2018 1:14:00 PM
Powerful. Love these lines "And you dream of magic wings to escape the hands of time"
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Date: 3/17/2018 1:22:00 PM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/6/2016 7:21:00 PM
This person needs magic wings very much! You are a beautiful poet, Emile.
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Date: 1/7/2016 9:20:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, you've made me blush with such praise. Emile.
Date: 1/6/2016 4:26:00 PM
excellent write Emile
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Date: 1/7/2016 9:19:00 AM
Thanks so much White Sage, your visits are much appreciated. Emile.
Date: 1/6/2016 3:45:00 PM
Wow this is a very emotional and deep write my friend , just keep it on cause ur doing it very well , great write indeed, hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/7/2016 9:18:00 AM
Thank you Dalia, you have brought a smile to my day. Emile.
Date: 1/6/2016 12:40:00 PM
piercing my soul with your deep words, emile.. great job; wow.. huggs
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Date: 1/6/2016 3:06:00 PM
Thanks Nette, you always know how to make me feel good. Emile.
Date: 1/6/2016 12:10:00 PM
well done Emile.. SKAT
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Date: 1/6/2016 3:05:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 1/6/2016 11:36:00 AM
Emile, such a wonderful write. You carry such a generous flow..By that I mean with your words you make the reader feel like your words are a gift..thanks for sharing..-luloo :)
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Date: 1/6/2016 3:05:00 PM
Thank you Laura, you have brought a smile to my day. Emile.
Date: 1/6/2016 11:11:00 AM
I really love your quatrains, always elegantly composed, full of meaning and this one is no exception. You have described someone that has to have perfectly. I;ve met a few in my time.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/6/2016 11:14:00 AM
Thanks Mark, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

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