Magic Tree

Written: February 2nd, 2024
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Amber light fills tree nest
From the clearing near the woods, hawks and sparrows fly
magic best

Fey Prince builds realm
Tulip shells loom and dry
imp whelm

round lights
staircase door spy
night

Amber light fills tree nest
Tulip shells loom and dry
night

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/1/2024 9:25:00 AM

Congratulations Las! Fantasy in the magical world of fey. :)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 3/1/2024 1:17:00 AM

S P, thanks for participating in my contest and congratulations for your placement. Best. Mohan

Howard Kerr

Date: 2/4/2024 9:14:00 AM

Your edifying rhyme excels in every vital literary department. You enrich this piece with deft penmanship, luminous depiction, and concise linguistic flow. Sotto, yours is a magnificent palette. Howard

Speaks Volumes

Date: 2/3/2024 3:39:00 PM

A fine minichu my friend. It reads very well. BOL from Wen.

Silent One

Date: 2/3/2024 11:26:00 AM

This enchanting poem transports the reader to a world filled with wonder and mystery, where amber light fills tree nests and fey princes build realms amidst the woods. Through vivid imagery and concise language, the poet evokes a sense of magic and possibility, inviting us to explore the hidden depths of imagination.

Jay Narain

Date: 2/3/2024 10:22:00 AM

Enchant poem. Love the lyrics.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/3/2024 6:05:00 AM

A magical theme and magical delivery, my friend. Eloquence captured in aptly crafted words: Amber light fills tree nest From the clearing near the woods, hawks and sparrows fly magic best...

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/3/2024 4:05:00 AM

An enchanting write, so serene, we have great bird life as there is a college with a large pond opposites us and we have so many species of birds and many many trees, in fact Johannesburg is said to have the largest man-made forest in the world. This poem is so peaceful. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Ink Empress

Date: 2/3/2024 3:43:00 AM

Ah dr sotto you always do these minichus so well and this is no exception! I love the rhymes and also how you’ve written this in a way that flows and is captivating! I especially love the opening lines “ Amber light fills tree nest From the clearing near the woods, hawks and sparrows fly magic best” magical imagery so ethereal and beautiful to the soul and mind of readers! “ Fey Prince builds realm Tulip shells loom and dry” how creative and deep are those lines ! love tulip shells most! BOL

Bill Baker

Date: 2/2/2024 9:45:00 PM

A creative rhyme, mystical and intriguing, my friend. An unusual night for flight, so to say. Have a pleasant day, Bill

Karen Jones

Date: 2/2/2024 6:14:00 PM

The way birds fly is indeed magical. Love this enchanting poem full of imagery.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/2/2024 5:41:00 PM

Hello Sotto, Your poem feels like stepping into a mystical realm. The imagery of amber light, hawks, and sparrows dancing around the tree creates an intriguing story of enchantment. The Fey Prince's realm and the mysterious staircase door add layers of intrigue. It's like peeking into a world where anything is possible. You really know how to spin magic with words! - Blessings, Daniel