Magic Place

See the mermaid bathing in her pool, as fairies scamper through the woods.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/19/2011 9:06:00 PM

So pretty Jack, the magic of the little folk are there to delight the imagination! PS, Thank you for all your sweet visits and dear comments. I don't deserve what you say but they do make me warm!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2011 11:54:00 PM

gosh,how did I ever miss this adorable one? COngrats on your win. this is really cute.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/6/2011 7:20:00 PM

Contratulations on the win in the contest,jack

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2011 10:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in John Moses Freeman's "Crystalline Euphony" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/5/2011 11:10:00 PM

lovely imagery, congrats on your win Jack

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2011 6:24:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Enjoyed..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/5/2011 3:15:00 PM

Always happy to see you in the winners' circle, Jack. I thought your entry had a very special surreal quality to it. Congratulations on your win in John's contest. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 9/5/2011 3:11:00 PM

Congrats jack on your 6th place win in john's contest.Very nice!

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/5/2011 8:52:00 AM

Hey there Jack, congratulations on your win :) lfde Wilma

David Williams

Date: 9/5/2011 3:38:00 AM

hey Jack congrats on your win..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2011 3:28:00 AM

Congrats Jack on another wonderful win my friend with this Magic Place entry so sensational luv.. depicting photo presented..wow..

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/5/2011 1:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the Crystalline Euphony Contest by John Freeman. CR

John Freeman

Date: 9/5/2011 1:47:00 AM

Thanks Jack for the honor of your worthy presentation in my contest. Agape. Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/4/2011 4:39:00 PM

Quite a breathtaking image of fantasy, Jack. Wonderful! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/3/2011 4:04:00 PM

lovely visual Jack and great imaginative piece my friend.. I just got in on this one luv..good luck..

Judy Ball

Date: 9/3/2011 3:51:00 PM

What a unique and clever take on this one Jack. Really like it. Love the imagery. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2011 3:05:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/3/2011 3:01:00 PM

Enchantment in the forest...You cast a magic spell with this one Jack. Good luck my friend. CR

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/3/2011 2:43:00 PM

This is a stunner Jack, love it!! Good luck for the contest, hope your weekend is a great one ;) lfde Wilma

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/3/2011 1:41:00 PM

If only.....anything with faries and mermaids speaks to me..I love it. BG

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/3/2011 1:07:00 PM

Gwendolen told me to check this out, and I am thankful I did! Mermaids and fairies in two short lines, I just really enjoyed this! So cool & magical indeed :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/3/2011 12:25:00 PM

Sizzle sizzle, Jack. This one is smokin' hot! Never imagined a mermaid bathin in a pool.....men are mars, women are from venus thing. ha ha. Top of the heap here, bud! Gwendolen

John Smith

Date: 9/3/2011 11:58:00 AM

See the satyr behind the tree? He's me. Delightful fun.

Emma Buckeridge

Date: 9/3/2011 11:48:00 AM

How very sweet and charming x