Magic Iron Door

Twelve Tiers high, the last bale of hay is on the wagon
Suddenly the ground  rumbles and the Growth  of an Iron door
 In the middle of the hay field , rusted hinges caked with dirt
 I walked to the other side, the same door from inside was locked 
Walking back to the front of the door I brushed away some dirt
There was an inscription, vigorously I brushed the belly of the door
                        “ The Key is a Teardrop of LOVE ”

My Mind went through Time, to July 10, 1956 : When my brother George “Died”
The tears flooded my cheeks, cascading down the Valley  of an old man’s Life
I brushed my eyes and a Tear trickled against the Iron door, The door disappears
The doorway GLOWS with GLORY  “ Welcomed to the “ Garden of a Loving Heart “
As I step inside, the birds  sing Welcome to Peace and Tranquility, Welcome to LOVE
 I could understand  their  voices, as they understand mine : The flowers spoke in Sight
                           “ Wafting, Aromas for ETERNITY “

Sunrise, and Sunset colors sooth Mother Earth’s compassion, the Forest and Seas Smile
I listened to the gurgle of the brook :” Grace Unites Reality , Grace Lives Eternal “ Always
The Butterflies converse with the Flowers;  as the oceans speak to the clear blue sky
I walk on the gentle Zephyr wind to the colorful Sunset  To the twilight of Eternity
With open arms my past Loves welcomes me ; my future beckons  me with serenity
I know I must return to reality : as I leave I set a Tear by the doorway “for tomorrow”
                             Upon my return, to fulfill My Destiny 

Inspired By the POEM "The Enchanted Garden" Written by "Constance ~ A Rambling POET"~
 For The Contest by Constance "I am sending YOU a Gift of POETRY~ Dear Heart"
                   Dedicated to ~ Constance ~ by HGarvey Daniel Esquire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Wellington Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 8:45 PM
Want to thank you for your words of encouragement...thank you very much
Wellington Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 8:43 PM
HG, I congratulate you on your win...well deserved. I like where you left a tear for your return...just to make sure that there is an entrance to your fantacy world again...great write. Thanks for your comment on my words...appreciate you reading them. Luv, Joy (Jew)
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October 2, 2010 at 6:11 AM
Congratulations on your win HG in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "I am Sending You a Gift of Poetry, Dear Heart". It is an honor to be on the list with you. Love, Carol
Cwiak Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 11:54 PM
Worded with compassion and the expression of a pen dipped in emotion. Great job, HG, and congrats to you on your win in the contest. Dan C
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 11:05 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Constance's contest, HG. LUv, Andrea
Gorelick Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 5:37 PM
How did I miss this? congrats my very dear HG..BG
Johnson Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 5:26 PM
What a lovely, gentle poem. I am proud of you. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce (Mom)
Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 2:47 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in nthe contest, HG
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October 1, 2010 at 1:16 PM
Congrats HG my silent beau on your win in Constance's contest..with this unique write from her inspirational original poem.. enjoy your brilliant win tonight ..forever and always "Sweetheart" ..with luv..
La France Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 8:24 AM
soup mail in a moment
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September 28, 2010 at 5:21 PM
this sounds amazing, Harry. you take your readers though a journey to this magic door whithin the earth. & again, bless your brother George. . where ever he may be now. i hope you are well. i love you always. ~Always&Forever your sister spirit, Lynn
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September 25, 2010 at 12:28 PM
Awesome write! Very inspiring. Quite a dream! Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Caroline.
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September 25, 2010 at 6:47 AM
enjoyed your well written poem today...you are always entertaining to read!
Peranteau Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 6:26 AM
What a riviting poem Sir ! It had me on the edge...and a fine dedication Mr. HGarvey ! much love, james
Mehta Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 5:09 AM
Very creative writeOn magic iron door, enjoyed it. HG
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