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Magenta Was the Sky This Morn

Magenta was the sky this morn Magenta was the sky this morn as I approached the day Ominous of clouded rose in petal’d full array Quietly it called to me in whispers on the wind A fragrance pure, so sweet its touch now falls upon my skin Engulfed in life’s serenity, so overwhelmed with fear A brush of fate in simple terms as if the end were near I stood to bare my feelings now a swirl in my mind In hopes of some off distant dream so soon would come to find Counting off the many tasks which brought me to this place The reasons that did hold the time my sequence now did waste Lost of any angered tears when captured on my brow To cry, if it has come to be, then let it find me now On my knees, the summer ground is warming to my touch With gathered hands to here my chest, this future I do clutch Loneliness companions me though still of wandered hope I pray that what will come before my soul shall bear to cope When suddenly a light appears, a magic in its sheen A softer glow, this lightened mist of heaven’s tangerine To touch upon the darkness in a spirit calling true In witness to the morning sun that feeds the skies of blue My heart beats now elated in a dance of utter bliss As memories of long ago, I find they do exist The rising sun to spill its charm in beacons shone above This warmth I feel, rekindled flame, aglow within your love The doubt did come of weakened state, a mind that was unclear A hollow moment filtered in through thoughts of you not near Alas the dreams of only one now obvious of two For on this day, the rising sun, brings me the love of you Good morning Soupers

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Date: 8/12/2017 11:56:00 AM
I am rewriting what i said.My arm got bumped This is a lovely poem that you wrote.I like it very much.I want you to know I read the poem you wrote for me every day.Love and Peace to you always my friend. hope all iswell with you.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/14/2017 12:45:00 PM
Thank you so very much Darlene. I am happy you liked both poems.
Date: 8/12/2017 11:51:00 AM
This is a lovely poem that you wrote. I like it very much.I want you to know that I read the poem you wrote for me every day. Love and Peace to you Always my friend. hope all is well with you.
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Date: 8/5/2017 3:45:00 AM
A very lovely poem. Congratulations!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/7/2017 8:45:00 AM
Thank you so very much Diana.
Date: 8/2/2017 7:28:00 PM
This has amazing imagery, a very worthy winner Chris, very worthy! And you know I'm sincere when I leave a comment!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/3/2017 6:35:00 AM
Thank you John. It means a lot coming from you.
Date: 8/2/2017 6:15:00 AM
Congrats on topping the list with this beauty, Chris !
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Chris Green
Date: 8/2/2017 7:18:00 AM
Thank you so very much Sushma
Date: 8/2/2017 3:57:00 AM
Great job Chris, love the imagery and of course the ending is intense. Congrats on a big win.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/2/2017 7:17:00 AM
Thanks so much Phil.
Date: 8/1/2017 1:10:00 PM
Beautifully crafted my friend, a most deserving win, congratulations...
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Chris Green
Date: 8/1/2017 1:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Charlie. It's a nice parting gift. : )
Date: 8/1/2017 12:16:00 PM
Lovely write, Chris with some exceptional imagery. I especially like the "heaven's tangerine" line. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place! Regards, John.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/1/2017 1:04:00 PM
Thank you John, I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 8/1/2017 12:01:00 PM
I smile at you my friend :) I am so happy you won this contest, you deserve it SO much! Hugs.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/1/2017 1:04:00 PM
Thanks so very much Darren.
Date: 8/1/2017 11:33:00 AM
Now, magenta has turned into a charcoal gray...for with your absence, we poets have lost our way...Spectacular read my friend...Congrats!!! on FIRST place...god bless and find your peace Chris...John...^WW^
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Chris Green
Date: 8/1/2017 1:03:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend. Those skies will clear up again before you know it. I appreciate your kind comment.
Date: 8/1/2017 9:21:00 AM
The most meaningful comment I could give to a fellow poet is to let him know that I read his poetry over and over. This is among those of yours in my favorites list, Chris. I'm delighted that it was awarded the first place honor. I miss reading you now and your kind comments on the writes of many here. Hugs to you.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/1/2017 10:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Lin for this beautiful comment on my poem. I am happy you liked this one so much.
Date: 8/1/2017 8:44:00 AM
My first time reading this amazing poem Chris. Your talent inspires! Congratulations on your deserving first placement my friend! : )
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Chris Green
Date: 8/1/2017 9:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie. I am happy you liked this but your poem deserved this more than mine. Congrats my friend.
Date: 8/1/2017 8:23:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/1/2017 8:29:00 AM
Thanks so much Dale.
Date: 8/1/2017 7:10:00 AM
You are an amazing poet, Chris, and this deserves to be first - congrats, my friend! :-)
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Chris Green
Date: 8/1/2017 8:17:00 AM
Thanks so much Greg. I am happy you liked this one
Date: 7/10/2017 9:35:00 AM
This is so beautiful Chris. I tend to agree with Heidi, this is clearly one of your best. The doubts that come in felt by you, you get your readers to feel them all. So glad that it ended on a beautiful note. True Love here...Maria
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Chris Green
Date: 8/1/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Maria, sorry for the late reply, I must have missed this comment.
Date: 7/7/2017 2:39:00 PM
I love this Chris, a wonderful poem :)
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Chris Green
Date: 8/1/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thanks so much Gary.
Date: 7/7/2017 8:55:00 AM
Good morning, Chris. Lovely way to start MY day:)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/7/2017 9:22:00 AM
Thanks Daniel...MINE too. :)
Date: 7/7/2017 8:41:00 AM
Wow! Now, I am sitting here, still having some coffee , sat back reading this and must say I think this is one of your best! I absolutely love this Chris. Outstanding lines and expression. Also filled with things I can identify with. So beautifully written and pieced together perfectly!! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/7/2017 8:48:00 AM
Heidi, my friend, I can not thank you enough for your wonderful comments on my poem this morning. I usually don't post long poems in the morning because they don't normally get much attention, so I am even more thrilled you stuck around to read this one. Your kindness is always a smile on my face.
Date: 7/7/2017 8:11:00 AM
Astounding description, stupefied writing, glorious result dear, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 7/7/2017 8:46:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend for your always kind words for me.
Date: 7/7/2017 7:01:00 AM
Ok so I had to quickly come back to say outstanding and extraordinary - So when do the poetry lessons begin. (lol) Have a great weekend for I'm signing off.
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Chris Green
Date: 7/7/2017 8:42:00 AM
Thank you Lisa, I appreciate all that you do for me. I always look forward to your visits.
Date: 7/7/2017 6:32:00 AM
Morning Chris. This is just beautious. Yes, beautious. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Chris Green
Date: 7/7/2017 8:41:00 AM
I think that is the first "beauteous" I have ever received...I like that. :)

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