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Maestro

I'm symphony in your hands fingers soft-playing my spinal keys ebony and ivory it's black and white tonight and every other night stoking with soft-sound stroking with tremolo touch the sighing notes in my throat starting to float scarlet-slicked bow flickering on sensitive string skin against skin against satin-sleek sheets sinuous sprawl of notes against musical sheets turning on tuning in unison cadence cascading waterfalls of whispered words moistening spilling rills trilling thrills up and down my spine and the keys warming up quavers quivering tempo quickening as you play me yes again and again yes breathless over and over yes never-ending yes never stop running your fingers up and down adagio to accelerando glistening glissando opening me to tremulous melody the pulse and the rhythm moving over me under me on top of me conducting overtures till you're symphony inside me

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Date: 4/30/2024 6:10:00 PM
very well done, congrats on your win Charlotte !
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Date: 4/30/2024 5:21:00 PM
You have expertly sustained the musical analogy in this sexy, descriptive WINNING piece, Charlotte! Janice
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Date: 4/28/2024 9:22:00 AM
Dear Charlotte, there is always so much to love about the lush master strokes of your ingenious artistry. I am ever in awe of your exquisite spine tingling imagery (so sensual and sensory) and mastermind poetic techniques. Sensuous, captivating, creative, physical, emotional wordplay, innuendo and metaphors take my breath away. A fantastic take on the contest theme.. I see a first place here! A fav! Warmest wishes my inspiring friend.. Susan
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Date: 4/24/2024 9:51:00 AM
You are a master of alliteration and assonance... You do it so well and this looks like a top winner for me.. It is a bit like personification to a point.. a breath taking fusion of music and passion, where the human body becomes an instrument and love-making transforms into a symphony. The imagery of fingers delicately playing 'spinal keys ebony and ivory' evokes both the tenderness and intensity of the connection between two people.
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Date: 4/19/2024 2:09:00 AM
What will the neighbours think, you playing loud music to drown out the screaming of sex all over the house. Dig the last line, worth the chase.
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Date: 4/18/2024 9:01:00 AM
Dear Charlotte, your poem is an exquisite orchestration of passion and desire, a symphony of sensuality that reaches deep within. I loved how the imagery of being played like a musical instrument by the maestro a wonderful picture of intimacy and connection. I love how each line pulses with raw emotion, capturing the moment's intensity with eloquence and grace. Your words evoke a visceral response, stirring the senses and igniting the imagination. Charlotte, what a wonderful world of ecstasy and euphoria, where the boundaries between music and love blur into harmonious unity. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/17/2024 3:17:00 PM
Sex in g major? Heh. Seriously though this was tastefully written and irresistibly sensuous
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 4/17/2024 3:46:00 PM
merci maestro

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