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composition of pieces of wind up mechanics behind the curtain is this animatronics? origami of instinct flying into the sun protege created the only natural one inspiration from somewhere spaced out fish faces vibes from stacked bones limbs metal replaces elegant hands allow wings to rest posturally perfect beautiful and blessed something exquisite quite out of this world essence unfettered creation unfurled Michael Cheval - Music of Eternal Radiance

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/30/2024 5:36:00 PM

Dilly Dally, I like your approach to the topic. Great metaphors. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/30/2024 10:38:00 PM

Thank you Janice, it's always a buzz to place in one of Craig's contests. I appreciate your kind words

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/29/2024 1:54:00 PM

i like how you've written this in short lines with no punctuation or caps, and i enjoyed the natural sounding rhymes; a very interesting piece - congrats on your placement in craig's contest!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/30/2024 3:25:00 PM

Thank you Charlotte, appreciated

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/29/2024 4:44:00 AM

Dear DD, Captivating with wonderful imagery and an introspective tone. The metaphor of creation as a symphony of wind-up mechanics and origami instincts is artistic. I love the juxtaposition of nature and artificiality prompts deep reflection on our own existence and creativity. DD, your words evoke a sense of wonder and beauty, boundless possibilities of inspiration and creation. It's a mesmerizing piece that leaves me in awe of your talent and insight. - Blessings, Daniel

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/29/2024 4:47:00 AM

You're too kind Daniel. Thank you for taking the time with my poem - all those aspects were stolen from the painting of course but it was a fun heist! Glad you liked it :)

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/28/2024 4:37:00 PM

A head bender for sure Dilly, not easy to make sense of these Cheval masterpieces, I’m sure that’s the whole concept behind his paintings, but your poetic interpretations add another dimension to the already impossible picture, Play it again maestro! brilliant, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/29/2024 3:37:00 AM

Thanks David :) :) :) The absurdist genre of painting is very freeing for poetic interpretation, it's great to not worry a jot what the painting is about sometimes and just freewheel through it and see what appears. It's all delightful interplay between the mind and the rest of the world :)