Made For You

Standing, searching, anchored to the bow of this ancient boat Two by two I see many a pair but who is out there for me Resilient rains dampen my day but my dreams remain dry and bright Standing, searching, anchored building my vessel board by board day by day Acts of kindness and love giving thanks to the Father above making me stronger, more appealing being ready for when you climb aboard when we set sail for the promised land No longer the seas will be lonely The moon will guide us The sun will be there to protect us The winds will blow us our sails will be plenty and always full all our prayers will be answered because darling I am being built for you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/30/2015 6:04:00 PM
wow, what a sweet metaphor for love! I really enjoyed this one and that last line is perfect!
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Date: 10/29/2015 11:55:00 PM
So promising,warm and beautiful..Fantastic!!A fave.
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Date: 10/29/2015 6:51:00 PM
Beautiful write Tim love the theme. I enjoyed reading very much!
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Date: 10/29/2015 5:15:00 PM
Your romantic write is lovely full of passion. Your descriptive flows smoothly with this reade. Brilliant...........A.M.
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Date: 10/29/2015 2:34:00 PM
Is there a lady that will not sail with a captain so gracious and brave? The answer is NO! Great poem my friend, Tim, that invites the heart to venture on the oceans of love!
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Date: 10/29/2015 10:03:00 AM
Imaginative and fanciful metaphors being used here. I agree with everything the other commenters have said about this work.
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Date: 10/29/2015 7:11:00 AM
Just beautiful Tim, but kinda sad. truly well written as always. Hope you find her soon, and sail away to blissful dreams. take care. best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 10/28/2015 11:31:00 PM
As if the whole universe is with you,, Love ur romantic writes always Tim. Great pen!
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Date: 10/28/2015 7:51:00 PM
warming me and it's not even valentine's yet.. sweet one, tim.. huggs
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Date: 10/28/2015 5:53:00 PM
"The winds will blow us our sails will be plenty and always full all our prayers will be answered because darling I am being built for you" This is so romantic and I hope this is true for you! Oh my, what a huge heart you have!! Be blessed -LU :) xxx
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Date: 10/28/2015 5:29:00 PM
Very nicely penned Tim!
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Date: 10/28/2015 5:04:00 PM
Well written, Tim. Loved the lines of the moon as your guide, sun for protection, and the winds blowing you to your destination...Made me ready to set sail.
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Date: 10/28/2015 4:13:00 PM
lovely metaphor Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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