Madam

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May 26, 2024 2:06 pm

A woman preferred to be called madam, Her chin’s level was at highest kingdom; She bought a precious kayak, To show she’s ma’am of luck; At noon, she cried over her first huge scam. At last, this woman changed her life’s tenet, “Humble and simple mom!’ in her mindset; She preferred to be called sis, Wow! All owed her a big kiss; Then dressed like sister, a nun with hair net.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/4/2024 11:28:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your very creative "Madam" write. "Good Luck" I know you are busy but I wish you would write more. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Len Gasun
Date: 6/10/2024 9:10:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting comments and encouragement my dearest poet friend. I've just written one while resting dear before I resume to my work. I'm glad you enjoyed this write but I didn't make it. God bless you and your writings. I'll visit you tomorrow, dear ok. Hugs

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/2/2024 10:46:00 AM

OH Len, this was a tough one, (contest) I didn't even try it. Your perseverance is beyond admirable. Great job! Get a big win! btw, did you like the Doggy Book? Thank you, my friend ~Anaya

Len Gasun
Date: 6/10/2024 9:07:00 AM

Thank you so much for your visit and for reading my poem my dear poet friend Anaya. Thanks also for your uplifting words although I was not chosen, they're my rewards. Thank you so much. About the book, of course I'll love it but didn't purchanse yet coz I haven't spoken yet to a friend who always purchase books for me. Maybe next week. Again, thank you so much dear. Hugs God bless you always.

Silent One

Date: 5/26/2024 9:22:00 AM

Nicely done.. its not very easy this, as I tried it and it took a while.. Yours is very good.. BOL in contest..

Len Gasun
Date: 5/31/2024 6:21:00 PM

Thank you very much for reading my poem my dear poet SO. Thanks also for your uplifting words and best wishes. Best wishes to you as well too. Your words are consolation prizes for me for being not chosen in the contest. It's not Joseph's type of limerick. Thank you so much. God bless you always and your writings.