Lying

I love how you think, your lying is just fine. You think it is OK for you, but not for others to lie to you. Lying is not good for you, not good for anyone to do. You are a one way street, a street I do not want to go down any longer. Date Write: 9/23/2021 Honorable Mention Difference in opinion Contest Judged: 11/13/2021 Sponsored by:Shreya LN

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/14/2021 6:59:00 PM

Dare to be true, nothing needs a lie, as the old adage goes! Congrats on your win, Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/15/2021 8:27:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day.............

Greg Gaul

Date: 11/14/2021 2:53:00 PM

Paula, I never thought I'd say I like your "Lying". You move content back and forth keeping the reader guessing until you deliver the author's imperative. So well done, lotsa of clever word choices paired with rhyming. Congratulations.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/15/2021 8:27:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this "Lying" write. Have a blessed day.............

Garima Dubey

Date: 11/14/2021 7:18:00 AM

Fibbing is a very tricky subject but you handled it well in your poem .Good read Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/14/2021 9:17:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this "Lying" write. Have a blessed day..............

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/14/2021 5:53:00 AM

WOW! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... wisdom expressed in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/14/2021 9:15:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day..............

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/25/2021 11:55:00 AM

Hello Paula, yes lying is not a good idea. It would be found out in a while. then the truth must come out. Hugfs Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/26/2021 10:13:00 AM

Hello Paula, those that lie asa way of life is so wrong. They will not be believed. Blessings my friend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/26/2021 8:48:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write. Yes, the truth will come out. Some do it as a way of life. It is wrong. Have a blessed day..............

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/24/2021 11:32:00 AM

Some people lie because it is "convenient" whereas others, like Donald Trump, lie to cripple and/or destroy. So sad that Europeans could not accept the Native American standard . . . .

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/26/2021 8:47:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write about lying. Have a blessed day..............

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 9/24/2021 10:17:00 AM

Great share. Every sentence meaningful and last two lines end it perfectly. Excellent ink. Loved it l Hope you have a wonderful weekend friend

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/26/2021 8:45:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you love this one. Have a blessed day..............

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/24/2021 8:23:00 AM

You tackled a difficult subject with honesty...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/26/2021 8:42:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this Lying write. Have a blessed day..............

Brian Strand

Date: 9/24/2021 1:22:00 AM

Very apt verse Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/26/2021 8:41:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day.........