Funom Makama Poet Sonnet

Lustful Invitation

This rare beauty is the age of my son
cuts her eye in a slow erotic deed
my heart and attention she has won
swings her short skirt to show her kind of breed
whispers and fine dances are her language
showing her ownership of ripe objects
despite the obvious gap in our age
her tricks or my fall, none is the subject
drags me by the tie to show more red light
every flesh I touch my under recites
swinging boobs, raising laps, her sexual might
penetrates my inhale like a sharp kite
hard to resist, 'no' I said to this peach
then she swings me off her body like leech.

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Bawa Talwar July 3, 2017 at 6:21 PM Beautiful rendition of beauty.Hard to resist the provocation yet you succeed. Very well written. Funom Makama July 19, 2017 at 1:01 PM yeah Bawa, I just had to. Thank you very much sir

White Wolf June 18, 2017 at 8:18 PM I do adore a good sonnet! I really enjoyed this one, Funom! Well done Funom Makama July 19, 2017 at 1:01 PM Thank you so much white wolf

Jack Horne August 23, 2016 at 3:33 PM powerful stuff - lovely write, my friend Funom Makama July 19, 2017 at 1:00 PM Thank you so much Jack Horne

David Smith August 7, 2016 at 1:00 AM Great build up. No matter how well it seems hidden what is inside does not stay hidden if we know how to look. True beauty comes with a soul. Beauty without a soul is pretty scary like a banshee. Best wishes David in slightly chilly NZ Funom Makama July 19, 2017 at 1:00 PM Thank you very much David Smith

Michael Dom August 6, 2016 at 9:53 PM sultry sonnet for sure! Funom Makama July 19, 2017 at 12:59 PM Thank you so much Michael DOm

Nette Onclaud August 6, 2016 at 5:45 PM sultry, sultry write that describes a tempting appeal, funom... i like!..huggs Funom Makama July 19, 2017 at 12:59 PM Thank you so much Nette Onclaud

Paul Callus August 6, 2016 at 3:20 PM 'Tis a very good description of this young beauty, Funom! She has the making of a tease...a temptress...a hooker. Understandably hard to resist, but you manage to overcome lust... Regards // paul Funom Makama July 19, 2017 at 12:59 PM Yeah my gentle good friend Paul.. Thank you sir