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Lustful Invitation

This rare beauty is the age of my son cuts her eye in a slow erotic deed my heart and attention she has won swings her short skirt to show her kind of breed whispers and fine dances are her language showing her ownership of ripe objects despite the obvious gap in our age her tricks or my fall, none is the subject drags me by the tie to show more red light every flesh I touch my under recites swinging boobs, raising laps, her sexual might penetrates my inhale like a sharp kite hard to resist, 'no' I said to this peach then she swings me off her body like leech.

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Bawa Talwar

Date: 7/3/2017 6:21:00 PM

Beautiful rendition of beauty.Hard to resist the provocation yet you succeed. Very well written.

Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 1:01:00 PM

yeah Bawa, I just had to. Thank you very much sir

White Wolf

Date: 6/18/2017 8:18:00 PM

I do adore a good sonnet! I really enjoyed this one, Funom! Well done

Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 1:01:00 PM

Thank you so much white wolf

Jack Horne

Date: 8/23/2016 3:33:00 PM

powerful stuff - lovely write, my friend

Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 1:00:00 PM

Thank you so much Jack Horne

David Smith

Date: 8/7/2016 1:00:00 AM

Great build up. No matter how well it seems hidden what is inside does not stay hidden if we know how to look. True beauty comes with a soul. Beauty without a soul is pretty scary like a banshee. Best wishes David in slightly chilly NZ

Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 1:00:00 PM

Thank you very much David Smith

Michael Dom

Date: 8/6/2016 9:53:00 PM

sultry sonnet for sure!

Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 12:59:00 PM

Thank you so much Michael DOm

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/6/2016 5:45:00 PM

sultry, sultry write that describes a tempting appeal, funom... i like!..huggs

Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 12:59:00 PM

Thank you so much Nette Onclaud

Paul Callus

Date: 8/6/2016 3:20:00 PM

'Tis a very good description of this young beauty, Funom! She has the making of a tease...a temptress...a hooker. Understandably hard to resist, but you manage to overcome lust... Regards // paul

Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 12:59:00 PM

Yeah my gentle good friend Paul.. Thank you sir