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She walks down the street wow this girl’s a peach A guy turns to stare at her derrière His girlfriend’s livid ... she’ll make his life hell! Image 3 5,5,5,5,5,5 checked with soup syllable counter Tableau 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May 03/29/21

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Date: 4/4/2021 7:00:00 PM
Hello Jan ... he'll be on rations for a while now. He must not have heard the adage; a woman scorned - thanks Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 4/4/2021 2:23:00 PM
If I had a girl like his, I wouldn't look at any other woman. He's like the dog that barked at his own reflection in the water. Good write.
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Date: 4/2/2021 12:27:00 PM
way to go on your high win, jan. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/1/2021 7:37:00 PM
Oh, will she ever make his life hell! You nailed it, Jan. Congrats on your win. Cheers, gw
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Date: 4/1/2021 9:22:00 AM
Congratulation on you win. "So True" A cute write and picture. Have a blessed day and Easter................
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Date: 4/1/2021 7:31:00 AM
So cute. Love it. God bless you with many more. Love, Gina
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Date: 3/31/2021 11:40:00 PM
Really like this Lustful poem Jan, I bet he will feel the wrath of his girlfriend! Very well expressed. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/31/2021 11:29:00 PM
LOL....Good take on this one Jan...Congrats on your win...much love :)
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Date: 3/31/2021 9:43:00 PM
Back with congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/31/2021 2:48:00 PM
Great interpretation of the picture, Jan! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 3/31/2021 1:28:00 PM
Yes, men should wear blinders when they walk with their girlfriends. Your poem gave me a great giggle. Congratulations on your win in Joseph's contest! Have a blessed Easter, Jan. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/31/2021 9:28:00 AM
Loved this one Jan. Thought I had commented on it. Oh well another email wandering in the ether! Oh those wandering eyes have gotten him into trouble again! Well done and congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/31/2021 5:07:00 AM
Congrats on your win Jan, Very nicely done
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Date: 3/31/2021 2:22:00 AM
Your words and the picture compliment each other extremely well, Jan! The g/f's fascial expression is priceless! :) Reminds me of Michelle Obama...but that's another story :) Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/30/2021 11:28:00 AM
- I did not want to be in his shoes :))) - Fun one, Jan :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/30/2021 10:45:00 AM
Lol! Jan, This a good interpretation of the photo. He is in the dog house for sure. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/30/2021 6:59:00 AM
Can't say I fault the gf, though. I mean, why is he looking like that? lol. That guy is in trouble! Nice one, Jan:-)
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Date: 3/29/2021 10:17:00 PM
Great imagery, Jan. It is hot to trot winner <3
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Date: 3/29/2021 10:16:00 PM
This is a gem of a poem, Jan. even without the picture, your words would draw the lines...
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Date: 3/29/2021 6:17:00 PM
That's some pic Jan. You nailed it. Good job. Good luck inn the contest. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/29/2021 4:24:00 PM
HA. She DOES look livid, that is for sure. I really like your take on this one, Jan.
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Date: 3/29/2021 2:10:00 PM
Oh yeah Jan, he’s definitely in the doghouse, lol, so well done with your humorous wit and flair, best of luck in the contest, cheers David
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/29/2021 3:05:00 PM
your comment made me smile, my original final line was 'he's in the dog house'! Great minds think alike:-) Jugs Janx x
Date: 3/29/2021 1:06:00 PM
very funny, jan! best of luck in the contest...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/29/2021 3:04:00 PM
Thanks Ilene:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/29/2021 11:33:00 AM
Great poem and photo as the object of his affection is well aware of his attention! But do notice he is still hanging on to the one in hand! Aloha! Rico
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/29/2021 3:04:00 PM
... but wait till he gets home lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/29/2021 10:01:00 AM
this pic must be from couples' therapy sessions lol... :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/29/2021 10:37:00 AM
lol Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx
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