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She walks down the street wow this girl’s a peach A guy turns to stare at her derrière His girlfriend’s livid ... she’ll make his life hell! Image 3 5,5,5,5,5,5 checked with soup syllable counter Tableau 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May 03/29/21

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/4/2021 7:00:00 PM

Hello Jan ... he'll be on rations for a while now. He must not have heard the adage; a woman scorned - thanks Jan - Lindsay

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/4/2021 2:23:00 PM

If I had a girl like his, I wouldn't look at any other woman. He's like the dog that barked at his own reflection in the water. Good write.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2021 12:27:00 PM

way to go on your high win, jan. Congratulations.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/1/2021 7:37:00 PM

Oh, will she ever make his life hell! You nailed it, Jan. Congrats on your win. Cheers, gw

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/1/2021 9:22:00 AM

Congratulation on you win. "So True" A cute write and picture. Have a blessed day and Easter................

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/1/2021 7:31:00 AM

So cute. Love it. God bless you with many more. Love, Gina

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/31/2021 11:40:00 PM

Really like this Lustful poem Jan, I bet he will feel the wrath of his girlfriend! Very well expressed. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Carol Mitra

Date: 3/31/2021 11:29:00 PM

LOL....Good take on this one Jan...Congrats on your win...much love :)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/31/2021 9:43:00 PM

Back with congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/31/2021 2:48:00 PM

Great interpretation of the picture, Jan! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/31/2021 1:28:00 PM

Yes, men should wear blinders when they walk with their girlfriends. Your poem gave me a great giggle. Congratulations on your win in Joseph's contest! Have a blessed Easter, Jan. Hugs, Carolyn

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/31/2021 9:28:00 AM

Loved this one Jan. Thought I had commented on it. Oh well another email wandering in the ether! Oh those wandering eyes have gotten him into trouble again! Well done and congratulations on your win!

Joseph May

Date: 3/31/2021 5:07:00 AM

Congrats on your win Jan, Very nicely done

Paul Callus

Date: 3/31/2021 2:22:00 AM

Your words and the picture compliment each other extremely well, Jan! The g/f's fascial expression is priceless! :) Reminds me of Michelle Obama...but that's another story :) Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/30/2021 11:28:00 AM

- I did not want to be in his shoes :))) - Fun one, Jan :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/30/2021 10:45:00 AM

Lol! Jan, This a good interpretation of the photo. He is in the dog house for sure. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/30/2021 6:59:00 AM

Can't say I fault the gf, though. I mean, why is he looking like that? lol. That guy is in trouble! Nice one, Jan:-)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/29/2021 10:17:00 PM

Great imagery, Jan. It is hot to trot winner <3

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/29/2021 10:16:00 PM

This is a gem of a poem, Jan. even without the picture, your words would draw the lines...

Judy Ball

Date: 3/29/2021 6:17:00 PM

That's some pic Jan. You nailed it. Good job. Good luck inn the contest. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2021 4:24:00 PM

HA. She DOES look livid, that is for sure. I really like your take on this one, Jan.

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/29/2021 2:10:00 PM

Oh yeah Jan, he’s definitely in the doghouse, lol, so well done with your humorous wit and flair, best of luck in the contest, cheers David

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2021 3:05:00 PM

your comment made me smile, my original final line was 'he's in the dog house'! Great minds think alike:-) Jugs Janx x

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/29/2021 1:06:00 PM

very funny, jan! best of luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2021 3:04:00 PM

Thanks Ilene:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/29/2021 11:33:00 AM

Great poem and photo as the object of his affection is well aware of his attention! But do notice he is still hanging on to the one in hand! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2021 3:04:00 PM

... but wait till he gets home lol:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Woodrow

Date: 3/29/2021 10:01:00 AM

this pic must be from couples' therapy sessions lol... :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2021 10:37:00 AM

lol Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx