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As I ogled her, my neighbor caught my eye and said "Isn't she gorgeous" ... Lust Contest Sponsored by Lewis Raynes

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/26/2017 5:19:00 PM

And you took her out for a drive...lol

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2017 5:56:00 PM

lol Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 7/26/2017 12:05:00 PM

Clever...and open to interpretation. let me experiment...I'll alternate, first looking at the picture with my right and then with my left eye closed! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2017 5:57:00 PM

I originally wrote about a Lotus car then changed it so it is open to interpretation - I do like your take on my poem lol I hope you don't go cross eyed :-):-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2017 6:18:00 PM

I can see why SHE would be ogled!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2017 6:53:00 PM

I left it open to interpretation ... it could be about a car or a girl lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/25/2017 10:26:00 AM

Hi Jan, This is a good take on the contest theme. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2017 6:54:00 PM

I write and hope Alexis:-) hugs jan xx

Alyssa Lorette

Date: 7/25/2017 10:19:00 AM

Good write, Jan! I wish you luck in the contest! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2017 6:55:00 PM

:-) thanks Hugs Jan x

Niall Fulham

Date: 7/25/2017 4:34:00 AM

Hi Jan , you have a wild funny imagination , good luck in contest :)))))hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2017 6:07:00 AM

lol George I never know what will inspire me and the poem is open to interpretation:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/25/2017 12:56:00 AM

I think I'll go for the Porsche. Porsches don't laugh when I get undressed :( . Good luck in the comp, Jan, Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2017 3:39:00 AM

lol Mr Viv no they just go vroom vroom when they see you lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 7/24/2017 9:13:00 PM

Good idea, which is the beauty the car or the b...?s

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2017 3:40:00 AM

exactly Eve I left it open to interpretation :-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/24/2017 7:50:00 PM

Yes, the car and the girl are gorgeous! Best of luck in the contest Jan! : )

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2017 3:41:00 AM

Thanks Connie :-) my original idea was to write about the car but this is far more ambiguous and open to interpretation:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/24/2017 2:39:00 PM

I'm sorry, did you say something? Nice one Jan:)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2017 3:17:00 PM

ha ha ha Daniel:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/24/2017 1:41:00 PM

- She's ... absolutely gorgeous, Jan :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2017 3:18:00 PM

just a pic from the internet and a poem from my head lol:-) hugs jan xx

Akkina Downing

Date: 7/24/2017 12:50:00 PM

Well how could you not look? Lol! Good luck in the contest, Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2017 12:50:00 PM

lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/24/2017 11:00:00 AM

Isn't she...The car looks fabulous...Thanks for sharing...I enjoyed it...Have a nice day every day

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2017 11:13:00 AM

I originally wrote it about a car but it is now open to interpretation lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jackie Elston

Date: 7/24/2017 9:27:00 AM

When l read your title and poem l thought' eye eye, whats going on here with Jan lol..then read yr comments lol..lust for a lotus car,yep ,me too lol. good one,love it.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2017 10:05:00 AM

Thanks Jackie:-) hugs Jan xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/24/2017 9:14:00 AM

Oh snap! I was caught, lol! Just kidding, but really awesome poem Jan! You made me smile with this one liner! Great Work!!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2017 9:17:00 AM

Cheers Russell I originally wrote it about a Lotus car but then I changed it to make it more ambiguous and open to interpretation:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/24/2017 9:12:00 AM

Did I say that out loud?? Lol

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2017 9:15:00 AM

hee hee I deliberately left the poem to be ambiguous so it's open to interpretation what they are looking at lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 7/24/2017 9:07:00 AM

Hey Jan. We really are in sync for posting at the same time. However, our subjects are eons apart.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2017 9:11:00 AM

Yes I have just seen my friend lol - I left this line open to interpretation ... I originally wrote about a lotus car, then changed it to be more ambiguous:-) hugs jan xx