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Lust

As I ogled her, my neighbor caught my eye and said "Isn't she gorgeous" ...

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Kim Rodrigues

July 26, 2017 at 5:19 PM

And you took her out for a drive...lol

Jan Allison

July 26, 2017 at 5:56 PM

lol Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

July 26, 2017 at 12:05 PM

Clever...and open to interpretation. let me experiment...I'll alternate, first looking at the picture with my right and then with my left eye closed! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

July 26, 2017 at 5:57 PM

I originally wrote about a Lotus car then changed it so it is open to interpretation - I do like your take on my poem lol I hope you don't go cross eyed :-):-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

July 25, 2017 at 6:18 PM

I can see why SHE would be ogled!!!

Jan Allison

July 25, 2017 at 6:53 PM

I left it open to interpretation ... it could be about a car or a girl lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

July 25, 2017 at 10:26 AM

Hi Jan, This is a good take on the contest theme. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis

Jan Allison

July 25, 2017 at 6:54 PM

I write and hope Alexis:-) hugs jan xx

Alyssa Lorette

July 25, 2017 at 10:19 AM

Good write, Jan! I wish you luck in the contest! :)

Jan Allison

July 25, 2017 at 6:55 PM

:-) thanks Hugs Jan x

Viv Wigley

July 25, 2017 at 12:56 AM

I think I'll go for the Porsche. Porsches don't laugh when I get undressed :( . Good luck in the comp, Jan, Viv x

Jan Allison

July 25, 2017 at 3:39 AM

lol Mr Viv no they just go vroom vroom when they see you lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

July 24, 2017 at 9:13 PM

Good idea, which is the beauty the car or the b...?s

Jan Allison

July 25, 2017 at 3:40 AM

exactly Eve I left it open to interpretation :-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

July 24, 2017 at 7:50 PM

Yes, the car and the girl are gorgeous! Best of luck in the contest Jan! : )

Jan Allison

July 25, 2017 at 3:41 AM

Thanks Connie :-) my original idea was to write about the car but this is far more ambiguous and open to interpretation:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

July 24, 2017 at 2:39 PM

I'm sorry, did you say something? Nice one Jan:)

Jan Allison

July 24, 2017 at 3:17 PM

ha ha ha Daniel:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 24, 2017 at 1:41 PM

- She's ... absolutely gorgeous, Jan :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

July 24, 2017 at 3:18 PM

just a pic from the internet and a poem from my head lol:-) hugs jan xx

Akkina Downing

July 24, 2017 at 12:50 PM

Well how could you not look? Lol! Good luck in the contest, Jan :)

Jan Allison

July 24, 2017 at 12:50 PM

lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arturo Michael

July 24, 2017 at 11:00 AM

Isn't she...The car looks fabulous...Thanks for sharing...I enjoyed it...Have a nice day every day

Jan Allison

July 24, 2017 at 11:13 AM

I originally wrote it about a car but it is now open to interpretation lol:-) hugs jan xx

Russell Sivey

July 24, 2017 at 9:14 AM

Oh snap! I was caught, lol! Just kidding, but really awesome poem Jan! You made me smile with this one liner! Great Work!!

Jan Allison

July 24, 2017 at 9:17 AM

Cheers Russell I originally wrote it about a Lotus car but then I changed it to make it more ambiguous and open to interpretation:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

July 24, 2017 at 9:12 AM

Did I say that out loud?? Lol

Jan Allison

July 24, 2017 at 9:15 AM

hee hee I deliberately left the poem to be ambiguous so it's open to interpretation what they are looking at lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

July 24, 2017 at 9:07 AM

Hey Jan. We really are in sync for posting at the same time. However, our subjects are eons apart.

Jan Allison

July 24, 2017 at 9:11 AM

Yes I have just seen my friend lol - I left this line open to interpretation ... I originally wrote about a lotus car, then changed it to be more ambiguous:-) hugs jan xx

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