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Lure of the Dance

I dance to the rhythm of an undefined song, without lyrics but the melody is alluring. I'm drawn to its beat as though magnetically pulled in much the same way as the moon channels the tides, fondling them ashore. Whether inherent or intrinsic, I fail to comprehend. It's always been a mystery to me... What is it that pulls me into relationships that leaves me adrift on the sea, or feeling the need to free myself from the muck and mire of quicksand, hoping I'll stand on my own once more? Shouldn't I be able to attract with body or mind, those who'd not end my dance with syncopated steps? Perhaps my power has not yet been realized. What force holds me back, I've yet to find. It escapes me, but I'll not allow it to shackle my feet. I've the need to focus upon gaining more strength, a willingness to ignite an internal light. One that glows with enough luminescence to radiate a welcoming gleam from me. It will fill my soul with unleashed momentum so, I can align myself with others, those who would join me in the lure of the dance. I must feel that pull in the light or the dark, whether the tide is ebbing or flowing. Is there one or more who is attracted to me, drawn by the look in my eyes? One who is aligned with my thoughts and in perfect sync with the rhythm that continually strums within my heart. October 24, 2022 Our Innate Magnetism Contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 10/28/2022 8:51:00 AM
DANCE AS IF NO ONE IS WATCHING.....I read that sign somewhere. It is your dance so you can lead and follow all at one time......Oh, the duality of divinity....
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/28/2022 1:26:00 PM
Truly insightful of you, John. If no one will follow my lead, I'll dance alone. Thanks so much.
Date: 10/28/2022 8:26:00 AM
In terms of poetry, this one is right at the top, Jenna! It’s a unique take on how you wish to invoke your inner magnetism. Warmest congratulations on your win, thanks for participating.
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/28/2022 6:17:00 PM
True but that hardly matters, Jenna ~ we are each unique in our thoughts and emotions. As I said, in terms of poetry, yours would have been right around the top but my contests are about the line of spiritual inquiry, soul refined then mirrored onto the world.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/28/2022 1:25:00 PM
Thank you for recognizing my poem in your contest for what value you've found in it, Seeker. I'm aware that it was not exactly what you were searching for in your theme selection.
Date: 10/25/2022 7:35:00 AM
Jenna, I so totally relate to your beautiful lines of desire and wonder ! For many years, I felt so similarly until I truly found myself first. You constructed these thoughts in such a heartfelt and romantic manner, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it this morning! Happy Tuesday xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/28/2022 3:05:00 AM
Mike, your comments mean a lot to me because they are personal. Thanks ever so much.
Date: 10/25/2022 3:29:00 AM
Jenna, beautifully penned!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/28/2022 3:02:00 AM
Thanks so very much for your encouraging thoughts, Tania.
Date: 10/24/2022 3:57:00 PM
Your magnetic avatar illuminates possibilities...let your dancing feet lead you till you're inseparably entwined with your dream reality. Lovely piece, Miss J. Winner chicken dinner no doubt. ~:O)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/24/2022 4:17:00 PM
I always doubt whether or not I've written what a contest sponsor is expecting, but if I post it... I like it. Thanks for your consideration, Arlo.
Date: 10/24/2022 9:48:00 AM
The theme of this contest with any other sponsor would be pretty straightforward Jenna, but with the Seeker it’s usually on a higher spiritual level, nevertheless your verse of magnetism, stuck in the mud, and unleashing momentum, is quite exceptional on a human scale, then your final stanza elevates the dance into a search for the oneness of dual synchronicity, perfect, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/24/2022 4:15:00 PM
I've no doubt he can manage quite nicely. It's kind of like a door that swings both ways.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 10/24/2022 11:46:00 AM
Really is strange Jenna, bird’s of a feather, and opposites attract, ah the duality of magnetism, Seeker reckons he can polarise it when meditating, I don’t doubt him,
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/24/2022 10:00:00 AM
Your insight on this subject gives me a bit of hope that I'm not missing the target as much as I think I am. However, I may not have taken much of a spiritual journey as he might have liked... I did look deep inside of myself to arrive at some level of self-recognition and savvy about my attraction to others, and theirs, or lack thereof to me. Thanks for reading me!
Date: 10/24/2022 9:28:00 AM
A very good take on a topic that was a little nebulous to me - this is very good free verse to me.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/24/2022 9:49:00 AM
Jeff, I always feel like I'm floating somewhere in outer space waiting for a star to light my way to where I might find what it is that Seeker expects. His themes are usually a bit vague to me. So, I become the Seeker in a realm in which I'm not familiar. Even if I don't find that key, I enjoy the challenge. Thanks a lot for your thoughts.
Date: 10/24/2022 8:03:00 AM
Jenna, your "Lure of the Dance" is beautifully written and so meaningful on several levels. I wish you the best in Unseeking Seeker's contest.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/24/2022 10:17:00 AM
Thank you
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/24/2022 9:33:00 AM
Well, you did a fantastic job. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/24/2022 8:09:00 AM
Thank you, Milt. I'm not at all sure of the concept he was seeking, but this is where my thoughts traveled.

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