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crystal clear night diamonds on black velvet cloth myriad of stars
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ancients visualised images of animate and inanimate objects a celestial collage.
Written on 10th May 2020.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 5/17/2020 10:10:00 AM
Beautifully expressed Tom - your imaginative write is holistically portrayed. Excellent. Blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 5/17/2020 12:04:00 PM
Thanks Jennifer, I bet the night sky is stunning where you are. Tom
Date: 5/16/2020 4:11:00 PM
Beautiful Tom. I love this :)
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Date: 5/16/2020 4:26:00 PM
Thank you very much Heidi, Happy you liked it. I hope you are doing okay. Enjoy your weekend Tom
Date: 5/15/2020 10:02:00 PM
you just brought the thoughts of Indians vision of the skies with animals "Native American Sky Gods and Spirits "
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Date: 5/16/2020 3:49:00 AM
Thank you Eve, the night sky has always fascinates me. Stay safe Tom
Date: 5/15/2020 8:51:00 AM
Cool pictures to add to the twinkle of this piece.
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Date: 5/15/2020 10:36:00 AM
Thank you Richard, hope you are well. Tom
Date: 5/14/2020 10:49:00 PM
So cool, Tom! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/15/2020 1:49:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim. Tom
Date: 5/14/2020 10:16:00 PM
Love star gazing. I once dreamt that I watched the constellations slowly past me in regal splendor. Celestial collage... indeed!! Lovely write
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Date: 5/15/2020 1:48:00 AM
Thank you very much Eileen, glad you enjoyed it. I could sit out for hours looking up, I never get tired of it. Tom
Date: 5/14/2020 11:59:00 AM
wel, well...two lunes winning almost simultaneously, tom...you are on a great poetic roll... sweet congrats!...huggs
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Date: 5/14/2020 12:51:00 PM
Thanks Nette, that was my original entry then read the rules lol. Thought I'd post it anyway. Hope you're well. Tom
Date: 5/14/2020 10:47:00 AM
Excellent Tom. Congrats on your well deserved win. God Bless and stay well, JB
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Date: 5/14/2020 10:54:00 AM
Thank you Judy, I'm happy you liked it. Stay safe Tom
Date: 5/13/2020 6:53:00 PM
Tom, wonderful, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _Constance
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Date: 5/14/2020 3:06:00 AM
Thank you very much Constance. I'm happy you liked it. Hope you're well Tom
Date: 5/13/2020 10:54:00 AM
Articial,y written and great images, Goid show, Tom Panagiota xxoo
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Date: 5/13/2020 12:47:00 PM
Thanks very much Panagiota. Glad you liked it. Tom
Date: 5/13/2020 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations Tom on your winning placement. This is so visual for all of us who have stargazed. "Celestial collage" - really nice conclusion. Over Fork Over.
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Date: 5/13/2020 12:48:00 PM
Thank you very much Sam, the night sky is awesome on a clear night. Over Fork Over. Tom
Date: 5/12/2020 8:44:00 PM
great combo, Tom, art and your words. shalom, shalOM
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Date: 5/13/2020 2:16:00 AM
Thank you Anil, happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 5/12/2020 6:11:00 PM
It is truly magical to look up on a clear night and see so many stars. Sadly, because of light pollution here I don't see as many as I would like. Your words have painted a fabulous picture of the sky at night Tom, and like you I am completely awestruck by it. Great write Tom. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 5/13/2020 2:16:00 AM
Thank you Ann, it's a pity that light pollution seems to be getting worse. The way its going there won't be many places left to view the wonders of the heavens. Tom
Date: 5/12/2020 5:01:00 PM
Love that wording celestial collage! Nicely done, Tom
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Date: 5/12/2020 5:22:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, this was my first attempt at that form then re read the rules, thought I'd post it anyway. Tom
Date: 5/12/2020 2:36:00 PM
- There are a myriad of stars out there, and it's easy to become dizzy by its beauty ... beautifully written, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/12/2020 3:19:00 PM
Thank you very much Anne, the night sky is awesome. Tom
Date: 5/12/2020 11:06:00 AM
Creating animals and telling stories from the stars always fascinated me ... nowadays, light pollution is making that glory and wonder harder to see. I may have to check out this contest myself.
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Date: 5/12/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thanks Timothy, Im lucky as the light pollution is not too bad where I am. It was my original entry but then saw you have to use the visuals that the sponsor provided, a worn out piano or a pile of stones on the beach, ( a cairn I think they're called) Tom
Date: 5/12/2020 10:08:00 AM
wow.. You made a wonderful imagery.. Like a master in this form.. Great write Tom..
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Date: 5/12/2020 10:41:00 AM
Thank you Jenish, an awesome sight to see on a clear night, winter time is best because the sky is clearer with no haze. Tom
Date: 5/12/2020 7:45:00 AM
Oh I like these! Great write Tom! Take care :) xomo!
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Date: 5/12/2020 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Maureen, a subject that fascinates me. Stay safe Tom
Date: 5/12/2020 7:20:00 AM
Impressive vocabulary, Tom---enjoyed the splendid imagery. All the best.
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Date: 5/12/2020 7:30:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, nothing beats the night sky on a clear night, Im lucky I now live in the country where the light pollution isn't too bad. Tom
Date: 5/12/2020 6:05:00 AM
absolutely stunning imagery Tom I especially love the first stanza:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/12/2020 7:01:00 AM
Thanks Jan, my original entry until I saw the rules lol. Tom