Luna's Reply

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In peach colored sky I watch seagulls fly As sun bids bye to echoes of their cry Silhouettes on high of these birds I spy As glimmering waves sigh, night will draw nigh The sun, soon to die, will never ask why As wings of night ply for Luna's reply 4/26/17

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2017 11:41:00 AM

lovely monorhyme Jospeh congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/1/2017 5:04:00 PM

There's nothing like a moonlit evening for a muse. Great response to the internal monorhyme prompt. Congratulations are in order.

John Michaels

Date: 5/1/2017 10:59:00 AM

This is a lovely piece, Joseph. Congrats on your high-placed win! Regards, John.

Darren White

Date: 5/1/2017 3:39:00 AM

Very beautiful, Joseph. Well deserved win, congratulations :)

Brian Davey

Date: 4/30/2017 6:28:00 PM

Congrats on your fine win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2017 6:27:00 PM

Wow, this surely did deserve a high placement. VEry well done, Joseph and Congrats for your win.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/30/2017 5:09:00 PM

Hi Joseph, Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexiw

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/30/2017 3:38:00 PM

Great Monorhyme, Joseph! Congratulations on your podium win! Sandra

John Hamilton

Date: 4/30/2017 2:08:00 PM

Really enjoyed this fine rhyme Joseph, congrats on a fine win!

Joseph May
Date: 4/30/2017 4:52:00 PM

Thank you so much for my placement John

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/26/2017 11:43:00 PM

Hi Joseph, You did great with the contest theme. Your internal monorhyme was good. I could see the sun setting in my mind. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven :-) Alexis