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Love moon night couple | Moon stars art, Moon art, Good night moon

aye, indeed ... dangle your dreamy toes, darlin' we sit the moon as whimsy - a shimmery sea of suns to tickle our feet, while we nuzzle noses ... your hair is rainbow tinsel - eyes, a wild maelstrom of wonder ... twirling into those plum bows, that glisten for a kiss - the gleaming gossamer tapestry spun with your smile, to melt my midnight melancholy and drip upon the twilight it's whisper of the morn ... aye, indeed!

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Date: 3/14/2022 7:09:00 PM
"twirling into those plum bows, that glisten for a kiss" - Great. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/24/2020 1:32:00 PM
I just got the wordplay luna sea, lunacy very clever!
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Date: 12/24/2020 1:30:00 PM
Yeah of course...loved this, hope you're starting to feel better, how is your mom doing?
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