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Luna

A collage of warm leaves Branches tangled against the fierce horizon The pulse of paws hitting the ground The soft melody of her collar Bitter autumn air Biting at our fingertips A rebirth of exhilaration

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/21/2023 2:47:00 AM
Wow, such an intriguing and profound write with marvelous imagery, dear Emily. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and was really captivated.. The descriptions are so elegant with thoughtful word-combinations.. The atmosphere is really beguiling as well! "Branches tangled against the fierce horizon, the pulse of paws hitting the ground" Amazing!
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Date: 10/21/2023 2:43:00 AM
Great poem Emily, you expressed it so well..
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