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Lullaby Loving You

Another awake, another empty dawn awaits Nothing to look forward to at the end of the day A lonely walk, giving myself a coffee pep talk Then your morning glow gave my eyes a proper bright hello Oh, beautiful butterfly with the sunflower smile Fluttering by in rainbow polka dot style I saw you land on a park bench in Belle Isle, sitting alone for a little while So I made a smooth gardener move, and gently planted myself next to you A budding conversation then ensued ... my goodness, how quickly things grew Love petals in my heart blossoming anew, I now understand some rain is necessary too Though the seasons have changed, my feelings for you remains the same Blissful evenings in my life ... sunset skies with a golden hue Every night, I have pillow dreams of lullaby loving you In the moonlight, I dream of sunbeams Me lullaby loving you Then I awake the next day, daydream waiting to meet you all over again Detroit daydreaming every night Pillow sighs of lullaby loving you Romantic moonlighting every single night Sunbeam thoughts of me lullaby loving you Then I awake the next day, daydream wanting to meet you for the first time to begin Dedicated to my beloved friend, Kee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/18/2018 2:14:00 PM
To Freddie, My Poet Pac-Man Great Friend. I've concluded by your very fine poem here that you are a Romanticist and Sentimentalist at heart. The ending refrain is the perfect ending here for sure. Joy, Peace, and Love Always My Friend -- Cheers, Gary
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Date: 1/25/2018 8:49:00 PM
Hello Freddie oh such a romantic poem,you wrote. Beautifully written. Love Peace, and Joy. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/25/2018 9:18:00 AM
Love the gardener metaphor you weaved through it, soo serene Freddie, this is simply beautiful, nice dedication!
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Date: 1/19/2018 6:54:00 PM
Oh this is just gorgeous. I really really like it a lot! And I'm sure your friend will love no doubt... hugs and smiles and love always :)
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Date: 1/19/2018 1:48:00 PM
What a beautiful dedication to your friend.. I hope they get to read it..
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Date: 1/19/2018 11:46:00 AM
My GOSH Freddie .. this is just beautiful. A heartfelt dedication! Absolutely loved the imagery ..."planted myself next to you", "budding conversation", "how quickly things grew", "love petals in my heart" ... so very cleverly created. A favorite for me!! ~Judy
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Date: 1/19/2018 11:38:00 AM
Hi Freddie, What a beautiful and down to earth type of poem. Also I found it to be dreamy and romantic.When two people meet or start a conversation it can grow into something much more, one never knows. Nice heartfelt dedication. Well done:-) Alexis
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