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March 26, 2018 for Vermillion Scythe's "Lullaby in the Sunset" Contest

Lullaby In the Sunset

Lull-lull-lull-a-by, my dear. Summer’s sun sinks low, rosy-streaked behind the hills; hear the soft wind blow. Lying on the velvet grass by this gentle stream, let the song I sing for you bring a lovely dream. Feel the warm breeze on your skin and your face so fair. How it lingers, like my hands which caress your hair. Sun is jealous in his sky, vanishing from view. When he leaves, he cannot be shining down on you. Birds are singing in the trees with my lullaby. Soft winds blowing, streams flowing. Let your worries fly. Let them fly away from you to the rising moon. Darling, you are safe with me. Sleep is coming soon. Simply close your pretty eyes. Always know that I will be here. My love, my dear, Your sweet dream is nigh.
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Date: 5/25/2020 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your splendid win in Brian's contest Andrea! This is so soothing :)
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Date: 5/25/2020 11:37:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your awesome win in Brian's contest with this beautiful poem _Constance
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Date: 5/25/2020 11:33:00 AM
'Andrea, Congratulations on your first place! Great imagery and flow. Keep posting your excellent poetry. David'
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Date: 4/9/2018 1:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win. Beautifully flowing lullaby.
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Date: 4/8/2018 10:21:00 PM
Sweet lullaby, Andrea. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/5/2018 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this soothing beautiful lullaby!
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Date: 4/5/2018 8:46:00 AM
A lovely lullaby Andrea..Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/4/2018 9:24:00 PM
Excellent write & great imagery , Andrea, ...Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/4/2018 6:58:00 PM
Very soothing with a lovely lyrical flow, Andera. Congratulations on your fine podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/4/2018 3:16:00 PM
Beautiful and very calming. Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 3/28/2018 10:46:00 AM
I am relaxed, feeling the warmth security brings and ready for blissful sleep. How lovely this is, and I absolutely adore the stanza with the jealous sun - just wonderful. You delivered all the lullaby ingredients in soothing, beautiful versus. Ahhhh Love ... CayCay
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Date: 3/27/2018 2:22:00 PM
Oh wow, how beautiful, such lovely lines of dedication and love.... flows like heavenly streams...
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Date: 3/27/2018 9:50:00 AM
I absolutely LOVED this Andrea!!! Such beautiful flow in your lyrics makes me think they lend themself so perfectly to music. Sun is jealous in his sky, vanishing from view. When he leaves, he cannot be shining down on you. WOW!!!! I think this is a sure winner!! ~Judy
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Date: 3/27/2018 12:16:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, This is so well written and and romantic. The scenery was on point. I could just picture two young lovers lying on the grass. And what I saw was just breathtaking . It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/26/2018 10:10:00 PM
This flows so well Andrea!..I actually could hear a little melody to that! In answer to your question...yes I work with horses for a living...going on 20 years now! And yes..I do love it, and them! :)...seems we are thinking alike on our sculpting :) Always a pleasure to visit your poetry :)
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Date: 3/26/2018 9:57:00 PM
the child in me is back from almost ancient times ... as your lyric chimes ... lovely rhythm and rhyme ... a definite winner ...
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Date: 3/26/2018 4:24:00 PM
So sweet, romantic lyrics! Soothing and rhythmic cadence in your words..well crafted call.. to adore love..best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 3/26/2018 3:56:00 PM
aww what a dreamy lyric Andrea so gentle and it flows so beautifully:-) hugs jan xx
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