Lull, Silent and Calm

lull, silent and calm saturated the moor, reap.... black clouds push onward _________ Contest

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Constance La France

Date: 1/6/2011 5:07:00 AM

You have painted a "haunting" picture of the moors, I have never seen the moors, but only read about, or seen in movies but I can imagine it just as you describe~~

Charles Henderson

Date: 1/4/2011 10:21:00 PM

soup mail waiting, Rick.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/3/2011 12:50:00 PM

gotta love LOOKING at the moors too scary to walk there! Light & Love Thanks for all your kind comments!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/1/2011 10:10:00 PM

Ah yes, the calm before the storm is so quiet -- almost eerie, Rick. Great haiku, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/31/2010 4:19:00 PM

lovely haiku , good luck in the contest Rick

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/31/2010 3:56:00 PM

Good one..Possibly for the silence contest maybe..If so, good luck..Reads like a winner to me..Sara