Get Your Premium Membership

Lucky Stars

My daughter's due date was 12 years ago today (she wasn't born for another 12 days though) Tonight she asked if we could spend her bedtime in the hammock outside chatting We watched as twilight faded Bats came out and flew over our heads And we lay snuggled together Watching stars pop one by one into view Deciding which were shooting stars or planes We listened to the sheep on the fields They never disturb us despite being noisy The motion of a bats flight is mesmerising Acrobatic, controlled chaos For some reason a lone sock had been forgotten on the line, which was exciting for 1 split second We chatted about the day, celebrated Nanna's bravery, talked about pending high school And I realised how lucky I am

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/2/2023 7:22:00 PM
How very beautiful and very special for you both….its the simple unplanned moments in life that often become our most treasured memories! Such a lovely heart poem DD! Debx
Login to Reply
Da11y Avatar
Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/2/2023 11:49:00 PM
Thanks Deb, I'll have to ensure I repeat it - it was really special, especially with her starting high school on Wednesday x
Date: 9/2/2023 5:01:00 PM
You are indeed and this is quite endearing, a snippet of a day in the life
Login to Reply
Da11y Avatar
Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/2/2023 11:47:00 PM
Thanks Tom

Book: Reflection on the Important Things