Lucky Shoes

There was an old pair in the barn
Looked horribly dirty and torn
But the match would be won
Only if they were put on
Although the smell had to be borne

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/15/2013 4:55:00 PM
and by the way, this is sure a cute limerick.
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Date: 4/15/2013 4:54:00 PM
Hey, I ran across a beautiful faved poem of yours in case you wanted to enter my contest. Anybody HOme is the name of it!!
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Date: 11/7/2011 10:31:00 PM
TAHERA..CONGRATULATIONS ~ IN THE SHOE CONTEST... I THINK every title is aweome.. ;-) Have a wonderful NIGHT, GOD BLESS,..P.D.
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Date: 11/7/2011 9:06:00 AM
Congrats Tahera on a wonderful win for this excellent entry in the Shoes contest luv..hope u are doing well...luv..
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Date: 11/7/2011 8:39:00 AM
Congrats, Tahera. Great write. Enjoyed. Nice going. All the best. xxxRalph
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Date: 11/6/2011 10:42:00 PM
TAHERA~ SORRY ABOUT THE DELAY~ CONGRATULATIONS!~ in my shoe contest~LUV*SKAT
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Date: 2/11/2011 3:59:00 AM
Cute poem for the contest, best of luck~~
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Date: 2/5/2011 10:36:00 AM
Nice write on nthe lucky shoe, a nice thought well expressed, tahera
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Date: 2/5/2011 9:58:00 AM
A winner Im sure Tahera, beautifuly written and witty for smils...love it always Michael
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Date: 2/5/2011 5:39:00 AM
Extremely imaginative piece Tahera my friend.. but if for Irma's contest for the shoes... the word SHOES must show in your title my friend so not to disqualify ..good luck with luv..
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Date: 2/5/2011 5:37:00 AM
Got a chuckle reading this one..Glad that I stopped by..Thanks for the review of my work..Sara
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Date: 2/5/2011 1:43:00 AM
Good one! lol, Tahera. Lainie
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Date: 2/5/2011 1:07:00 AM
What a touching image of the old shoes you have created for the contest, Tahera. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:43:00 PM
This looks like a good limerick if it is being entered in the shoe contest.
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