Lucky Shoes

There was an old pair in the barn
Looked horribly dirty and torn
But the match would be won
Only if they were put on
Although the smell had to be borne
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 4:55 PM
and by the way, this is sure a cute limerick.
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 4:54 PM
Hey, I ran across a beautiful faved poem of yours in case you wanted to enter my contest. Anybody HOme is the name of it!!
A   Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 10:31 PM
TAHERA..CONGRATULATIONS ~ IN THE SHOE CONTEST... I THINK every title is aweome.. ;-) Have a wonderful NIGHT, GOD BLESS,..P.D.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 9:06 AM
Congrats Tahera on a wonderful win for this excellent entry in the Shoes contest luv..hope u are doing well...luv..
Taylor Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 8:39 AM
Congrats, Tahera. Great write. Enjoyed. Nice going. All the best. xxxRalph
A  Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 10:42 PM
TAHERA~ SORRY ABOUT THE DELAY~ CONGRATULATIONS!~ in my shoe contest~LUV*SKAT
La France Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 3:59 AM
Cute poem for the contest, best of luck~~
Mehta Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 10:36 AM
Nice write on nthe lucky shoe, a nice thought well expressed, tahera
Falotico Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 9:58 AM
A winner Im sure Tahera, beautifuly written and witty for smils...love it always Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 5:39 AM
Extremely imaginative piece Tahera my friend.. but if for Irma's contest for the shoes... the word SHOES must show in your title my friend so not to disqualify ..good luck with luv..
Kendrick Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 5:37 AM
Got a chuckle reading this one..Glad that I stopped by..Thanks for the review of my work..Sara
George   Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 1:43 AM
Good one! lol, Tahera. Lainie
Devonshire Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 1:07 AM
What a touching image of the old shoes you have created for the contest, Tahera. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Pettit Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 10:43 PM
This looks like a good limerick if it is being entered in the shoe contest.
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